Reviews for Chance
Geenie ate me chapter 1 . 9/4/2007
hm...it was sweet, and the descriptions were great! poor ed and al...if only they never did it...and as for the movie, i was satisfied with it. not completely happy, but it was still okay.
Ao yuki chapter 1 . 9/26/2006
Sigh... What a wonderful fanfic. I think you portray Edward perfectly. :)
Tsuyu no Inochi chapter 1 . 8/22/2006
Excellent!

These brothers are finally connecting. Their love and devotion for each other is clearly visible. Edward's determination and Alphonse innocence is neatly protrayed.

I am feeling this one, Iggy. Great job!
MilesTailsPrower-007 chapter 1 . 8/17/2006
That was good! You captured Ed's protective brotherly side very nicely. Everything was well written.

However, someone might've been helping you with your tenses, and you left one of their notes in there by accident... ;)