Reviews for Notable
Ceri Moriarty chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
SO AWESOME! SO CUTE! KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
Kuko-chan chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
I was listening to that last song you recommended while I was reading and my goodness, it fit perfectly! It really helped set the mood for this story! Your narration and description are phenomenal! Not many authors can describe the feels that love can invoke the way you did! It wasn't just a confess-and-kiss story, you really explored the emotion behind that kiss. And I love how you included that brief flashback at the beginning. It really goes to show how Riku has evolved as a person from his childhood to now. Well done!
WriteEm chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
Wow...just wow! It's so yummy and descriptive and o I just love it! You describe the complexities so well, it's just unbelievable. Truly a wonderful piece of writing! Thank you!
youkai chick supreme chapter 1 . 9/9/2007
wow. i'm like speechless, for once in my life. haha. seriously though, amazing. i like how the kiss is a little awkward, (aren't all first kisses?) and i like the thought of riku playing a piano. that's easy to imagine. very cute. well written too. i enjoyed it. and i did listen to "gravity" which went well with it. nice background music. :D
MikaAyame chapter 1 . 1/6/2007
*sits at computer, truly flabbergasted*

It was beautiful.

The entire story flowed wonderfully, and the characterization was wonderful... and Riku playing the piano was totally hot. :P

Wonderful, wonderful job. Definitely a new favorite.
kuriqa chapter 1 . 12/18/2006
again with the honey sweet cuteness kisses that makes this rabid yaoi fangirl melt... i think i like you, i like you lots, i love you long time JK that last part is a running joke in my house btw i am addicted to the submit button... it makes authors happy tho, so i don't think i'll be put in rehab for it... LOL

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fullmetalguitar chapter 1 . 11/22/2006
OMG. I seriously have lost all remote traces of intelligent thought... wow. And I'm strongly tempted to just up and call it a night on that perfect note. Whoo-yum of the literary kind
Riku-Rocks chapter 1 . 8/28/2006
Beautiful. You really have a gift for words. One can almost hear and feel the scene as they read it. Keep writing.
OrangeTabby chapter 1 . 8/18/2006
*squees*
TaraTheMisfit chapter 1 . 8/16/2006
That was so hawt -hearts- it made me drool at the end lol. I absolutely love Riku and Sora! awsome work! keep it up!
Dusty's Chocobo chapter 1 . 8/16/2006
Aw! please write some more stuff like that soon.
Katraa chapter 1 . 8/16/2006
That was so beautiful and everything T.T I love these kind of one-shots.. you must do another! I swear it! I am so adding to favorite.
Yumi-Ulrich4ever chapter 1 . 8/16/2006
Awesome fic, very beautiful and I liked the well-written descriptions. The refrences to the songs also made wonderful comparisons to the story, excellent job