|Reviews for Karma|
| jtdarkman chapter 30 . 3/26/2012
Great Effin ride i wasnt a member tie first time and then when i became one i could not for the life of me remember the title lol... then BAM found it and this time i finished it and it was still AWSOME thanks for writing it looking forward to all your other stuff lol see ya
| Cortney chapter 30 . 10/5/2011
Best written and most accurate portayals of Spike and Faye I've ever read. Bravo!
| Disposablehero chapter 30 . 9/22/2011
Hey, guys. I know it's been years since I wrote this, but I just wanted to say I appreciate the continued feedback. It's like a warm little present in my inbox, yanno? & one of these days I will write the sequel (I started but the magic just wasn't there). It's when that Bebop Moon comes round again. One thing, though: I did cuss WAAAAAY too much in this. Just a bad habit from my college days. Thank goodness I had the foresight to take down all those other rotten stories- they really were bad, y'all. Take care...
| Olena chapter 24 . 9/7/2011
I felt like such a sucker reading that last line. It actually brought tears to my eyes because this...this normality is what I've spent all of the last four years since I've discovered Cowboy Bebop looking for.
You've left me feeling like I've just seen a Miyazaki film; you've managed to capture life in your art and I just got the most bitter feeling in the pit of my stomach as I changed the chapter because it was only as I was waiting for the page to load that I realized it was art and not reality.
Constructive Criticism: none
Commentative Criticism: Spike is so out of character that it broke the spell that your narrative wove. Be more careful in where you let your hand show when crafting fanfiction.
| Crimson Angel 437 chapter 30 . 12/25/2010
Haha, I know that I'm a little late on finding this story but I just wanted you to know how much I enjoyed it! I like that it had angst but not craploads, there's only so much angst I can take when I want them to get together so badly!
Thank you so much for writing this :)
| Dee chapter 30 . 10/20/2010
Honestly speaking: this was one of the best fics I've ever read.
It really touched me, y'know? Like how really good storytellers can. It was so natural, and everything they said or did was perfect. I can't tell you just how glad I am to have stumbled across this. :)
Go write a book. Do it.
Or just put up more fics! ;p
| anonymous chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
Your writing style is really unique and it almost seems like you planned this all out.(going by your A/N's you probably didn't)
this is definitly one of the better bebop fics on here.
for a start it made sense i.e no bloody spelling/Grammar mistakes, thank fuck!(i just get annoyed by them is all)
Anyway, definitly a good read. Kudos!
| Anonymous chapter 30 . 8/3/2010
I loved this interpretation. It was just a fun read in general. The lack of severe angst was wildly refreshing too, seeing that most Spike/Faye stories out there seem to be filled with it. I hope you keep writing for this ship. All the awful bebop fic out there makes this a true gem
| MyLovelyValentine chapter 30 . 6/21/2010
I've been reading Cowboy Bebop fan fictions for YEARS and I'm amazed that I hadn't stumbled upon your WONDERFUL story until now! I hope that you never decide to take down 'KARMA' because I assure you, I'll be reading it a second time (and I don't find many stories worth re-reading). :) I rarely ever leave reviews upon finishing a fan fiction, but I just had to share with you how much I enjoyed YOUR story (and depiction of Faye and Spike). What a great job!
| empathapathique chapter 30 . 6/7/2010
This story was unbearably amazing. Great work!
| Tomorrows News chapter 29 . 5/8/2010
Lord all mighty, this chapter was fucking sexy. Not nearly as sexy as the maybe-will-they-idon'tthinkso-ohshittheydid kiss earlier, but I've always been a less-is-more kind of guy.
You've got some talent on you, buddy. Maybe it's the insight, the empathy you can evoke in me- it don't matter so much cause I know I dig this story and I'm damn disappointed you took down all the other work your profile says you had up.
Also get the feeling you had a nice little number like Faye yourself irl seeing how you fucking nailed her (pardon the innuendo, it's tasteless and I'm horrible for writing it) part in this story. All her reactions completely believable, girly, a little deviant from the show but thats expected, and definitely sexy.
You're going to have to do with that gushing cause I'm creeping myself out now. Take it easy.
| Pen Liddin chapter 30 . 4/26/2010
I enjoyed reading every page of this, even the ones you said you didn't like. You never really had to justify yourself in the a/ns but i really like that you did. Showed incredible faithfulness to the story while adding creativity. Worthy of Cowboy Bebop down to the bone, thanks for writing!
| pen liddin chapter 5 . 4/26/2010
you've got spike down, wonderfully done. the others too, its just hard to get spike without making him seem whiney or too angsty. You've kept him as cool as ever, well done. can't wait to read more.
| xxxxx11111 chapter 30 . 3/9/2010
God, I forgot how amazing this was. I'm on such a renewed Bebop kick at the moment.
I wish you'd write more again.
| ere-melo chapter 30 . 2/28/2010
damn, you are seriously one boss writer.
this was the most epic Bebop fic; I love.