Reviews for The Price of Valor
Gandalf -Dumbledore -Obi-Wan chapter 1 . 8/25/2006
oh, me likes. lots of cryptic foreshadowing. i wonder what it means... (heavily hinting that i want an update? me?)
Asteria chapter 1 . 8/18/2006
This looks very cool. It seems a bit convoluted to me, but I have confidance that you'll clear everything up. I look foreward to reading further.
lydia the eleventh chapter 1 . 8/17/2006
Reading this made me feel like a terrible writer - I pale before your talent!

No, in all seriousness, this is a GREAT start - I really wish I could write like this. Your Beckett voice had chills runs down my spine and my ire up, and his relentless taunting of James for paying the most priceless object in the world for the shell of his former life made me want to kick Beckett. Guess that's what makes him such a wonderful villain. Tia was also spot on, right amount creepy, obscurely motivated and omniscient. A little confused in what's implied, but that might be me being dimwitted - don't make James give over his heart! He doesn't have his heart, he's going to become Beckett - A snob in a white wig!

What will become of him? Oh, keep writing!
To Die Laughing chapter 1 . 8/17/2006
Hm... Intriguing. I eagerly await the next chapter.
Hecate chapter 1 . 8/17/2006
Excellent beginning. I'm really looking forward to the next chapters!
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