Reviews for Secrets To Die For
Kisa167 chapter 10 . 2/11/2008
Update soon kay I'll be here waiting! hugs for you!
Lady Flick chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
'He couldn’t just asexually reproduce.'

For some reason, that whole notion just had me laughing, because I bet you he'd find a way to do even that -cough-

Anyway, Sasuke's asexual-ness aside, this wasn't half-bad for your first fic C:

Actually, the premise is rather intriguing, Sasuke losing his memories.

Though I'll admit, I think Sasuke's half was better written than Sakura's portion.

I don't know what it was, but I found reading her part slightly annoying ( almost-pun intended).

It might have been the way you wrote her dialogue with Tsunade, and the thoughts in between.

They kind of disrupted the flow for me - oh, and the hyperventilating,

I think it would have been more powerful if you didn't...dialogue that out?

xD Actually, I found that it was more humorous that way, unless humor was your intention, then keep it C:

Anyways, I think that if you got yourself an ace Beta-Reader, everything would be taken care of :D

All in all, it was a very good first fic, attempt C;

Goodluck on future endeavors, now!

~ F L ii C K
Kisa167 chapter 9 . 1/8/2008
Update soon! I really love how its coming along! ~_

Lots of love always

~ kisa!
Nature-Fascination chapter 9 . 7/26/2007
It's so amazing so far! Can't wait for chapter 10!
Firerose1300 chapter 8 . 3/10/2007
goo story
Kari Hibaki chapter 8 . 3/10/2007
this is real good! but plz space ur story out more...the paragraphs are HUGE! it gives me a headache .
ThineDreamer chapter 8 . 3/8/2007
Loved it. Add more please.
The-Raven-Girl chapter 8 . 3/7/2007
Love the story. Update real soon!
AngelSachiya chapter 7 . 11/26/2006
I'm sorry I couldn't update sooner! The alert thingy was down so I didn't know that you had updated! SORRY! I'm glad you updated though! I love this story almost as much as I hate school! ~~ So whenever you get the chance, please update soon!
The-Raven-Girl chapter 6 . 10/13/2006
wow, great job, I don't mind that nothing has happened. Update soon!
The-Raven-Girl chapter 5 . 9/23/2006
great job. Update soon!
NorngPinky chapter 4 . 9/20/2006
LOL, Chapter 3 had me laugh LOL! XD

Anyway, keep writing! -

~ norngpinky
The-Raven-Girl chapter 4 . 9/18/2006
great job! I love your story so please update as soon as you can!
Aika16 chapter 3 . 9/8/2006
Really good story so far! Can't wait for the next chapter! _
Erythrozyte chapter 3 . 9/8/2006
I really don't think that your fanfic is an bad one. It's quite the opposite, really!

Your Chapters are indeed a bit short, but I don't mind, because I really like your style of writing and the story.

Hop to read the next chapter soon!

Greets, Lily
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