Reviews for Two Steps Back
meigetsuhikari chapter 8 . 11/23/2013
Timeskip?
BeyondMyReach chapter 8 . 11/23/2013
Wow. This story is so fascinating and cool, but I don't really understand the recent chapter. Please update soon. The anticipation is killing me.
ZeeCaptein chapter 8 . 11/19/2013
Please don't stop writing!
Moonstone blaze chapter 8 . 11/15/2013
Wow hilarious! I love the funny and connecting moments between all the kids. I'm confused like Kakashi about what happened to Naruto and what happened in that strange confession room. Great plot though...please keep updating :)
NaruSasuNS chapter 8 . 11/12/2013
Nice story. Really gooOOOOOooooOod...
Eclipse1234 chapter 8 . 11/6/2013
Brilliant. Disjointed and makes my head hurt but brilliant all the same.
CrystalBud chapter 3 . 11/6/2013
love it :D
NX-Loveless-XN chapter 4 . 11/3/2013
AW!
Sarutobi always figures it...
Go Sasuke! CHA XD
NX-Loveless-XN chapter 3 . 11/3/2013
Why the name Kenshin? I feel like that name comes up a lot for pseudo names.
Sasuke and little Naruto are adorable! 3
Elise chapter 8 . 11/1/2013
Very interesting. A little puzzling and a hole lot of awesome. :)
Clarilyn chapter 8 . 10/31/2013
For a former deranged avenger I sure am liking Kenshin. Naruto and Ino as the two hellions sound like the cutest thing ever - the timeline for this universe is something new, too. Can't wait to see where this goes.
BYoshi1993 chapter 8 . 10/30/2013
A unique story for sure. You've adequately kept me in the dark about a lot of things. Hopefully those concerns will be cleared up eventually.
zeonista13 chapter 8 . 10/10/2013
Itachi is becoming quite the problem. He is almost too crazy to be part of Akatsuki, or whatever organization you are creating. But it won't get fixed soon, eh? Te various character bits being brought up in conversation was amusing. Apparently Naruto still doesn't know Hinata is alive, poor girl. Neji seems to have been less of an oppressive presence in her life, and is helping Hanabi, so less Hyuuga drama is good. :) Shizuka seems to finally have made chuunin, which pleased me a lot. It's good to see hard work pay off, even if it took a while. Please write some more! You have something interesting happening here.
zeonista13 chapter 7 . 10/10/2013
Well, now we have a Sasuke to go along with "Kenshin", this will probably require some plot juggling, right? Fortunately, we can tell them apart. Not too surprisingly, the lack of an Uchiha massacre and having teammates able to hold up their end of a mission made Sasuke easier to deal with. Kakashi was still Kakashi, but he was more engaged, and less of a burned-out jerk than he was in canon. Gai-sensei is fun to write in character, isn't he? :)
zeonista13 chapter 6 . 10/10/2013
Evidently Naruto survived his first encounter with Kyuubi Time, since the story continued with him later on. I suppose you wanted to point out that Academy-era Naruto would not have been ready for that sort of event, even with his advanced training. Of course, if Naruto-kun had been weaponized, that might not have been the case, but this would be a different story, right? Having Itachi snap under the strain of his double life and flee after facing an angry Naruto made for a very dramatic event! I also was interested by the oddball cultist and his link to jinchuuriki events. Evidently you have a long-term plot line there...
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