Reviews for Forbidden Angel
Guest chapter 3 . 3/26
Artemis and Holly throughout this fic are definitely very OOC, but with a story that pairs them together it's hardly possible to keep them in character and tell a romantic story, that's not the kind of characters they are so I guess it's fine if they're OOC. I still ship them to death despite the impossibilities of this ship
Guest chapter 2 . 3/26
Holly's kind of irrational, the guy kissed you and is trying to kiss you again, why the fuck would you think he doesn't like you?
Guest chapter 4 . 5/21/2016
Suh dude for president 2020
Guest chapter 3 . 3/25/2016
Book! You need more romance in chap 1 and2
alex chapter 4 . 3/21/2016
threw up. twice but not that bad
Guest chapter 4 . 1/8/2016
nice. you took an ok machup and made a realy goof fanfic out of it. good job. :)
Emanuel chapter 4 . 12/15/2015
Sehr gut. Ich liebe Holly und Artemis
Dawn to Dusk Makes A Day chapter 4 . 7/12/2015
Hmm it was k-ind of good, but how is it that Artemis's parents don't recognize Holly? They should have known by now, if my knowledge has remembered the right stuff. Anyway, that was awesome, hey? Rated 8/10 coz I didn't really read the lemon scene coz it seemed all too sudden. Ok ok, 8 and a half /10!:-D See ya!
same random guy chapter 4 . 10/11/2014
Loved it tell me if u make any more.

PS. I personally think u cut the love sene a little sort.

PPS. I'm just your average pervert so yeah don't think to hard about what (l personally) have to say ;-)
some random guy chapter 3 . 10/11/2014
Fuck your awesome! I couldn't do half a page with my fucked up imagination, and a full room of really awesome looking forward to reading the rest :-P
Baku101 chapter 4 . 7/1/2014
I. Love. Yooooooooooouuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!
Baku101 chapter 3 . 7/1/2014
When is Artemis going to fuck Holly.
nympho chapter 2 . 5/27/2014
gosh so cute! i love evanescence though i never quite imagined it to fit ballroom dancing. maybe if the song is editted into a ballad... maybe
i'm not saying chapter 4 . 2/24/2014
Guest chapter 4 . 12/1/2013
Loved this fanfic woho
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