Reviews for Forbidden Angel
MegaPop chapter 4 . 7/12
Hmm it was k-ind of good, but how is it that Artemis's parents don't recognize Holly? They should have known by now, if my knowledge has remembered the right stuff. Anyway, that was awesome, hey? Rated 8/10 coz I didn't really read the lemon scene coz it seemed all too sudden. Ok ok, 8 and a half /10!:-D See ya!
same random guy chapter 4 . 10/11/2014
Loved it tell me if u make any more.

PS. I personally think u cut the love sene a little sort.

PPS. I'm just your average pervert so yeah don't think to hard about what (l personally) have to say ;-)
some random guy chapter 3 . 10/11/2014
Fuck your awesome! I couldn't do half a page with my fucked up imagination, and a full room of really awesome looking forward to reading the rest :-P
Baku101 chapter 4 . 7/1/2014
I. Love. Yooooooooooouuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!
Baku101 chapter 3 . 7/1/2014
When is Artemis going to fuck Holly.
nympho chapter 2 . 5/27/2014
gosh so cute! i love evanescence though i never quite imagined it to fit ballroom dancing. maybe if the song is editted into a ballad... maybe
i'm not saying chapter 4 . 2/24/2014
great
awesome
Guest chapter 4 . 12/1/2013
Loved this fanfic woho
Guest chapter 2 . 12/1/2013
Great
legend cable chapter 4 . 11/5/2013
nice story
yuh modda chapter 2 . 11/4/2013
nice
Guest chapter 4 . 9/7/2013
This is brilliant! please make a chapter when they grow up and have a
The Complimentor chapter 4 . 9/6/2013
This. Is. Brilliant! I nearly fell of my chair reading this! (That was a compliment) plz make more!
Moar chapter 4 . 8/1/2013
I like it. Wish there was Moar like it.
Guest chapter 2 . 6/17/2013
Arty: mesa feel zo unwuvededed!
Hooly: bcuzzzezz u izis!
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