|Reviews for Naïveté|
| LouiseUchiha chapter 1 . 2/8
Poor Baby. He is just a lost and scared little kitten.
| MelanisticLeopard chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
Very neat back & forth
Aw! Another Orochimaru rapes Sasuke fic? DD & Kakashi... that's new for me. The different element between this & others... not usually a KakaSasu fan. O_O (Of course, Orochimaru is easy to picture as a rapist... & a pedophile. Nobody likes him X( ) But. It worked-the KakaSasu. Although, he didn't really seem to know what he was doing! (He's Kakashi, he's older & more experienced & supposedly the seme!)
Wow... .' ...Sad... *Favs.*
It... it spiraled so much... (was pretty smexy in the beginning) it went from happy to depressing. Especially the last flashback... how you ended on that... instead of the cuddling! That was unexpected as far as I'm concerned! KAKASHI, STEP UP! Who lets their lover burn themselves in the shower anyway? But I liked it, even if it was angsty, I could tell that you really meant to leave it on that note! ;)
| Obelisk of Light chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
It's pretty good. Both of them are fairly in character for a KakaSasu fic. The Orochimaru rape is totally out of the blue; a morbid yet interesting twist. Good job.
| Dark Green Poop chapter 1 . 12/5/2007
Poor Sasuke... waah, Orochimaru is such an evil bastard. Stupid snake man! And I feel so sorry for Kakashi, he can't get any loving...
| ShadowFoxTrulsRohk chapter 1 . 5/21/2007
That was HOT & AWESOME & WOW!
Wow. You should write another. That was completely brilliant and beautiful. I say it again. That was deliciously HOT! And it was alos really sweet. Kashi was so understanding & comforting.
It was hot. So U should write another. Pretty please w/ sugar on top.
| GrimmXEchelonXShipperXNut chapter 1 . 4/11/2007
That was cool, I loved how the two parts went together so well, defiently going to favorites
| Nadramon chapter 1 . 2/25/2007
Hey! Remember me? ;)
Well well... It's still very well written and the parallelism makes a good effect. I still am no KakaSasu fan, though... Even less a lemon fan. ; (Even if I think Orochimaru having the hots for Sasuke makes perfect sense... And well, he wouldn't feel guilty for raping him, either. Nasty bastard... X( )
So. Good one-shot, I guess, for those who like the kind. Now I'm going to try another one of your stories! (If you ever write some new NaruSasu fic, you're eventually going to see me again!)
| KuronueObsessed chapter 1 . 1/6/2007
Whoa... O_O ... intense... *Adds.*
| JadeHora-Quan chapter 1 . 12/5/2006
wow...how much mor can i say but wow...
(wow in a good way, this is all good weird)
that was so so awesome in such a deep deep way.
really really good...
faves of course...
wow wow wow!
was that thing Orochimaru?
loving it! D!
love and luck and everything else,
from a very very very very very very very very proud fan,
| LoonyLevicorpus chapter 1 . 11/27/2006
o thats good
i like the way you write
| Ironic chapter 1 . 11/20/2006
omg,wow... i mean... wow.
the whole feelings, emotions were shown so perfectly, subtle, nicely and... and the whole idea was really sad, kinda depressing and even shocking, but you made it perfectly. yeah . and i agree with Tessa Marlene, it's just too good to be a oneshot... (:
| Captain Cheese chapter 1 . 11/6/2006
Oh this is so sad
| Evantis chapter 1 . 10/10/2006
| agent420 chapter 1 . 9/19/2006
Wow. This was so...so sad, and so painful, and I just wanted to hug Sasuke close and try to make the pain go away... You wrote his pain so perfectly, in a way that is consistent with the canon yet is enough to reach out and tug mercilessly at your heartstrings. I don't think enough people write Sasuke this way, describing his hurt without going overboard and OOC with it. Beautiful fic, I absolutely loved it
| SwingingOnAShootingStar chapter 1 . 8/31/2006
it was amazing, i really liked it...poor Sasuke. u know for a sec i thought it was Itachi, n i was thinkg WTF? then the whole Golden eyes gave away that it was Orochimaru...i really liked it, Good Job! .