|Reviews for Scorpion vs Paladin|
| Caerl chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
I like your premise. :)
Almost like a David vs Goliath far will the mighty mite's luck go? Hmm? (It is plausible, though. If the Paladin can't elevate his gun, the Scorpion could literally pick him to pieces.)
Aside from a few little things; Use through instead of threw; too instead of to; etc., a neat little two-part one-shot! (The ending got me hooked-Overlord... WHAT! OVERLORD! Maybe he doesn't have a chain-gun on his upper deck.)
| Rakaziel chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
Well written, well thought out, very thrilling and with a dry humor.
| Cant Namemyself chapter 1 . 5/20/2007
keep it up man.
| hitman33333 chapter 1 . 3/25/2007
Hey luke! this is a friend. who is it?
Mario IS cool
| blueeyedchibi chapter 1 . 8/18/2006
wow, kick-butt story. can't wait till the sequel! I will read it. Oh, and the SECOND chapter of my Draco/Hermione ficcy is up. Please read and review, and get to work on SACRIFICE!
yey this author is the best. read his stuff