Reviews for Deathbed
Melitza chapter 1 . 11/19/2006
Ichigo and Rukia together forever!


Beautifully dark and tragic imagery, somehow conveying a sense of romanticism that overshadows that overall angst of it. Beautiful, and exquisitely written.
Kane Shi Megami chapter 1 . 11/12/2006
Oh how sad :( but so beautifully written.
HellionKyou chapter 1 . 10/1/2006
I love tragics and even if ya didn mean ta well it seemed lihke one and i lihked it, beautiful wording.
Jane H.A.S. Doe chapter 1 . 8/20/2006
You're an uber good writer!
Silenced Cry chapter 1 . 8/19/2006
First off, let me compliment you on your proper usage of grammar, overall sentence structure and vocabulary. These three things are quite fleeting on

It was short and bittersweet, but I enjoyed it. I liked how it was abstract, but not to the degree that it was overbearing or pretentious. The last few lines, especially, were wonderfully written. Even though it was somewhat tragic, the ending was fitting and left the reader satisfied.

I hope you continue writing, despite the fact that most well- written fics (such as yours) are often underappreciated. Excuse my bitterness :)

Hope to read more from you!