this chapter is amazing during the time that Danger is talking to Hermione I can practically hear the chaos in the background it's written really well

Aaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh oh my goodness. The Krum twist was awful and made sense but also AWFUL, really well done honestly. The way Hermione absolutely KICKED HIS ASS and was a second away from murdering him as he deserved. Ron stepping in and balancing her!
I have a 17 year old sister, the idea of her becoming a parent is just...the wildest thing, I completely get why Harry doesn't feel ready, that is so much to deal with.
I'm so excited for the final installment!

VIKTOR YOU PIECE OF WORK
I'm SO proud of Letha for helping Ron like that, magically and emotionally, that was so beautifully done. And Evanie, bringing the best out of Peter? Wild, wonderful, magical

Potions for Letha! A space where she can have her own independent work, build and relearn her strengths. And music and memories bringing back her sense of self, through the power of LOVE
It's beautiful T_T

DUN DUN DUNNNNNN
I *love* your iteration of Percy, letting him lead and plan and organise and care for people...he's got a lot of his mother in him

I love the way they're giving her the space to find herself and assess them all without pressure or expectation. It's so healthy and kind.

Oh, poor Petunia. Poisoned by her own love, twisted by fear she carried her whole life.

AAAAHHHHHHH
Sirius is a BADASS Moony is BACK Letha is gonna be OKAY AHH

OH. The ravenclaw gems. Did she store her memories on one of them? DID SHE ANNE?!

EVANIE YOU CLEVER CLEVER WOMAN
I *love* how you're including so many different kinds of interesting, clever, problem-solving women from different walks of life. Aletha kicking butt with a broom and her toughness. Danger with her gentle casual friendliness with Mare. Evanie and her BRILLIANCE and empathy and ability to read people and assess situations SO well, I LOVE THEM

Is he gonna murder his parents? That feels like the kind of thing the Death Eaters would encourage. "Never stand trial" sounds like he's going to die...gosh he's developed layers of viciousness

:3 she thinks Danger and Sirius? I mean, I guess I understand but that's hysterical and so off base! She's so clever though, I'm sure it'll fall into place eventually

Oh of course! One of Ravenclaw's daughters was a squib, or did one of them go to America or something?

You're building tension and darkness so well. I *know* they're going to get out of this okay but I cannot see or remember HOW

I...didn't realise what Voldemort did to Sirius and Letha oh my god. Fuck. That's so fucking twisted and dark and terrible and tragic
And Evanie and Peter, it's shockingly sweet? She is absolutely going to be the best thing to happen to him