Reviews for Come Undone
Death101- Fox Version chapter 2 . 9/4/2008
That was awesome! I even cried when she was talking about the torture. Awesome job!

Death101- Fox Version chapter 1 . 9/4/2008
Oh my Ra... That was amazing. So who is the other?

crazyvegimab chapter 2 . 8/9/2007
This is quite cute. I love how part of Seto's soul died with her. I seemed so true to him, and just fit somehow. Nice job.
Spirit Of Innocence chapter 2 . 8/26/2006
DUDE! Such a cool story! I'm love with it _ Sorry I haven't reveiwed until now, I was on holidays and...yeah. Anyho. I thought it was SO cute! And I'm really glad you're doing another multi-chapter story. Hey! I thought you might like to know that you've inspired a one-shot I'm writing! You needn't feel obliged to read it, it's nothing special, just short and sweet, but indeed it was inspired by your style of writing which, as you know, I adore So. Keep it up Azaleea, as always I'm looking forward to the next installment!

Much love,

Seraxil chapter 2 . 8/24/2006
Hey bbe, tht was rly good, hurry n update! thnx 4 puttin me on the bottom of ya first chapter :D he he he. Great story update soon! HEHEHE X X X
Japyra chapter 1 . 8/21/2006
It has a bittersweet acrimoney, but it was well-witten nonetheless.
possessed by the anime chapter 2 . 8/20/2006
Aww... poor Seto...

This is really good! Continue with it! I love SetoKisara stories.
Neisha chapter 2 . 8/20/2006
BEAUTIFUL! So absolutly beautiful! I should pet said plot bunnies...or at least feed them something...hehe...

Such a wonderful thing to return to such a great I should get back to my own before I am off to the hunt again ...

Talk to you later?...Loved this...Truely...

Neisha chapter 1 . 8/20/2006
Came back a day early to a wondeful surprise! I loved this. Simply beatiful...And the Poetry..Stunning to say the least...


Skidoodle-Snickerdoodle chapter 2 . 8/20/2006
*nods satisfactorily* Twas very good! I can't wait for the next chapter! put it up! xD Lol, seriously though, excited for the next! Can't wait to read it!