Reviews for Jealous
liane chapter 1 . 1/5
oh my god! all the time i was reading this fanfic i thought danny was a little boy (thank god it wasn't because i was so confused and that would be really weird). no, no, i don't think it was ooc of gray, in fact i could imagine him feeling jealous over a teddy bear perfectly. very clever!
WonderJes chapter 1 . 6/26/2010

Poor Gray...

If I were Claire I'd-


Danny or Gray...?

That's tough. LOL
TheMaskedGirl chapter 1 . 4/27/2009
You mean Danny is a teddy bear? Like Teddy of Mr. Bean? CUTE!
DCFG chapter 1 . 7/23/2008

mandapaaanduh chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
... *snort*
Hyuchiha Ruki chapter 1 . 6/22/2008
That was simply adorable, I admit. I'll be publishing my very first Harvest Moon one-shot (which is GrayClaire) soon and I wanted an idea of what to write. So I searched for some stories & found yours.

For me, it wasn't too long or short. It was good as it is. I very much liked it. :)

Mistress Dark Star chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
I can actually imagine Gray being jealous of a teddy funny, yet fluffy in my opinion.


Nice work!
Jadzaea chapter 1 . 4/3/2007
LOL This is so cute and perfect! I started feeling bad for Grey, then I got to the last line and nearly laughed out loud here at work. :) Good stuff! Keep it up!
Hubblah chapter 1 . 8/30/2006
Poor Gray! But don't worry! Together we'll kill that evil teddy bear!
Tiger-Cub684 chapter 1 . 8/23/2006
i really like this story. Perfect length if you ask me. will this have some kind of sequal or anyhing? looks really good!
DoubleKK chapter 1 . 8/22/2006
HAHAHA! Girl stealing teady bear! Actually, I read this on deviant art this morning. That's kinda weird, huh? (but I kinda figured that Blaze-Hikari was you since I new your FF name already.)
Rhianwen chapter 1 . 8/20/2006
Hehehe...this is fantastic! Amazingly, unbelievably, melting-the-reader-into-a-puddle cute. :D
Tamara chapter 1 . 8/20/2006
aw, poor Gray

it's so cute the way he loves Claire :3

nice storie

sorry for the grammar mistakes, i'm brazilian x.o