|Reviews for Sins of the Mother|
| Vivid Fox chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
you should have kept writing this
| Lila xxx chapter 1 . 11/17/2010
| lifeandtimesofabrokensoul chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
Please Please Please Please continue! I'll love you forever if u do
| laurene chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
that was awsome u have to update please!
| bbblfl chapter 1 . 8/6/2007
For some strange reason i don't think I ever reviewed this, but I was bouncing around ff tonight and found it-
Jane, it was AMAZING. The characterization, the imagery, everything was so perfect. I have so missed your writing; how clear and vivid it is, how you express so much without going overboard in flowery descriptions.
Wonderful one shot!
| Faia Sakura chapter 1 . 1/22/2007
This story needs a sequel. The end is a cliff-hanger, and I'm sure that people have said that in prev reviews. You should make, I dont know, a sequel thats not a one-shot and have Paul finfin out. Besides what does Jesse do after, and things like that?
| Emmohdee chapter 1 . 9/12/2006
Wow, that was incredible! I really wish we could know what Paul's reaction was. Such a shame this is fated to be a one shot.
| Vicky-toria chapter 1 . 9/4/2006
Are you gonna write more? Cuz I definitely think you need to write more. That was a really cute story, I wish there was more. Wow, I just said more alot :
| Gravity's Rainbow -Nina chapter 1 . 8/28/2006
I already told I loved it on MCBC, but I'm just gonna review here too. Why not?
I loved it.
| Amaniel chapter 1 . 8/26/2006
That was really good! It was sad but good. You must write more.
| kutekittenx chapter 1 . 8/26/2006
*CLAPS* Oh my was that amazing! I truly loved it! Jesse was really sweet and i cannot wait to see Paul's reactions! Omg i am i need of an update here it was brilliant!
| thedilemma chapter 1 . 8/25/2006
OMG that was sad. SO sad, poor Suze. Poor Ava I feel so so sorry for Ava and for Jesse that was depressing.
| anonymous chapter 1 . 8/25/2006
This is great! Please continue with it.
| Sweetly Sarcastic chapter 1 . 8/21/2006
omg i love this so far! it has an incredible plot so far, and it's very intriguing (i think i spelled that wrong) anyway, applause!
| shoshobananababy chapter 1 . 8/21/2006
o wow that was good! i would like to know how it turned out though in an update or something