Reviews for Spiraling Downward
francis17pr chapter 15 . 1/30
Wow this was an amazing story , I read it all in just a couples of hours. I love the bitter sweet tommy and Kimberly fights. They were hurst but they still love each other so much. This definitely is going to my favorites
Joanna chapter 15 . 7/22/2013
Hi, it's 4:20am, and I spent all night reading your wonderful gem of a story. THANK YOU SO MUCH for writing it and seeing it through to its good ending. I'm about to click on your username to see what else you've got. Your writing is crisp and sweet and succinct without being cheesy. The dialogue just sizzles and sparkles! I burst out laughing several times. Despite needing my sleep, I really really hope I find more Tommy/Kimberly fics of yours. High quality fan fiction, in execution and emotion, are rare. This is one of them.

Thank you again! I loved this so much.

lucilla _ joanna at hotmail dot com
Silver Warrior chapter 15 . 3/11/2011
A truly magnificent story. The anger, the hurt, the heartache, the drama, all leading to love conquering evil. I even like how it set up the foundation for SPD. Even Dr. Manx's little cameo was awesome.
MCT chapter 15 . 1/13/2011
oh i forgot to add that i thought it was clever on how the first "it's morphin time" was introduced... i could really hear the cheers for the audience lol... the build up was great (of course the build up throughout the story excellent)
MCT chapter 15 . 1/13/2011
I know this is an old story but, This is an AMAZING story, i loved it! Each chapter literally pulled my heart strings. I love how you captured all the emotions of the unresolved issues of Tommy and Kim. The story arch was beautifully shaped with the angst and tension between Tommy and Kim to the overall story and how it blends seemingly perfect with one another. Also it was very creative, the way you brought in SPD to make the timeline true tying the seasons past and (seemingly more recent past but somewhat) present. The Jason Kat sub story fit amazingly, i believe they are a perfect fit together (and would have been an awesome power couple on the show, they compliment each other). Besides the romance aspect the idea of TED and the origins of the powers came was brilliant. I enjoyed how in the beginning i kept wondering what the prophecy was, it kept me guessing and interested. Also i liked how we thought we knew what it was but in truth the answer lies between the lines, and i liked how hayley was the one to discover it. sometimes one needs someone out of the circle with a different perspetive to see what the others haven't. Sometimes the rangers read the rules to litterally.

The one thing i wished to see more of were the new rangers, the younger generation . as shakespeare said "greatness was thrusted upon them" and their substory could develop (sequeal lol).

Overall great story love the character development and the plot was excellent. you are a brilliant storyteller. D
valepinkcrane chapter 15 . 10/25/2010
uauuu! I love your story!
Psycho Tangerine chapter 4 . 8/13/2010
I like this so far, but Tommy and Kim need to grow up, stop acting like big babies, and talk to each other. That's the only thing keeping this from really being an excellent story.
LORI chapter 15 . 7/2/2010
That was one of the best battle/reunion stories I've read in a while! You showed their emotions SO well! JOB WELL DONE!
The Violent Tomboy chapter 15 . 5/5/2010
Awesome story. Loved it. Would praise you properly but I'm tired. -
phantom12 chapter 15 . 2/17/2010
Breaking my own rule twice in the past month and actually submitting a review... very nicely done.
Magical Meerkat chapter 15 . 3/24/2009
Ahh that was so sweet. The part were Tommy was upset about the idea of killing kim when she first went missing made me cry it was brilliant loved it.
ufc91 chapter 15 . 3/2/2009
Wow! This story is wonderfully entertaining. I think you did a great job with the characterization of the Power Rangers, especially Tommy and Kim. Great story!
ufc91 chapter 3 . 3/1/2009
Good story so far. I liked the characterizations.
kloi21 chapter 15 . 2/19/2009
Absolutely awesome!
hewhoreaps chapter 15 . 4/28/2008
Quite a interesting story. I'm glad in the end both Tommy and Kim along with Lythmore and Lorvenia found happiness etc
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