|Reviews for Gin no Kyuubi|
| The Keeper of Worlds chapter 4 . 10/16/2012
Nice, you should really get back to this one at some point:)
| xxxmizuki-chanxxx chapter 4 . 6/28/2012
ahhhh so sososososososososososo good please update soon! :D
| Cindy M 19 chapter 4 . 9/19/2011
cool, update soon, can you make a little of gaasaku?
| pepergirl001 chapter 4 . 1/6/2011
| reven228 chapter 4 . 12/28/2010
i dont get it, is naruto like Gin from bleach? or somthing else. please elaborate.
| Kio 'Key-Oh chapter 4 . 7/30/2010
sweet story. :D i do hope you continue with it.
| bloocheeze chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
Hey, yeah. The plot of this story and the deliverance is really good. My only complaint (which is, by the way, my biggest pet peeve about fanfiction) is the use of Japanese words in it. Suffixes and jutsu names are fine (because they're, you know, titles and names).
Since the Naruto characters are already assumed to be speaking Japanese, its redundant that one puts Japanese words in the dialogue. Please edit out your Japanese words and refrain from using them. It gets really annoying.
Also, I don't want to sound rude, but most of the time, authors put Japanese words in their fics to make themselves sound knowledgeable. It doesn't work. For me, seeing something like baka, or teme, or kisama in a fic is an extreme turnoff. I was really looking forward to reading this, but now...
| Leaprechaun1 chapter 4 . 12/8/2008
Update soon please!
| monic chapter 4 . 11/30/2008
can you BE more confused about the scale of power? a sand genin taking a rasengan in the stomach and all he did was grund? he would have been completely out! the only reason kabuto wasnt fataly wounded by narutos first rasengan was because he focused healing chakra before it even hit, and even after that he was pretty out of it.
odama rasengan against genins? right. you had a great story going. the third chapter started getting weird when you superpowered the grass genins. by all means, they could have been jonin spies or whatnot that were hidden in your plot.. but now it just shows that you overpowered naruto to begin with and to balance it off you overpower everyone else, too.
on your first chapter the A/N was a complaint about the lack of good naruto stories and how cliche they were. you managed to fall in to the biggest cliche the naruto-fanfiction community has: Overpowering naruto without being skilled enough to pull it off in a story. Result: all opponents gets stupidly overpowered for no other reason then making the fights longer then one sentence.
| yoli chapter 3 . 11/30/2008
a thousand shinobis behind narutos abilities and he has a 5 min fight against 3 genins involving summoning toads to aid (which he never used before his powergain to begin with), water dragon etc. overkill much?
i love the story, but stuff that makes no sense just makes the reading experience a bit .. ugh.
assume naruto is as powerful as a jonin, that fight would take 3 seconds. assume naruto is as powerful as he is in shippuuden, that fight would take a minute or two. assume naruto has all the knowledge of the kyuubi and the ability to use way more elements then hes supposed to.. those grass guys should have been dead at the first jutsu.
| Broken Sexed Up Bloody Kitten chapter 4 . 9/21/2008
You know there doesn'tn have to have ,'s is between surname and given name...
"Uzumaki Naruto" is better than "Uzumaki, Naruto"
| Writer of Angelus chapter 4 . 7/17/2008
The fic is good. Keeps my attention. I hope you will continue this fic at your earliest convenience.
| Bluesnowman chapter 4 . 6/19/2008
Pretty good so far.
| Randoh chapter 4 . 5/27/2008
This is stupid.
The EXACT same format for the gennin exams?
Tag team matches?
Thousands of years of memories/techniques and Naruto cant take care of 2 simple gennin?
Think about it.
| SeithrKairy chapter 4 . 5/6/2008
Aack! you came back! MY! even if the story that had been update now wasnt the one I want, an update is still an update... (Pout) So... please update the other stories too please?