Reviews for if you were ever here, you would know
xxRiku'sxxDarkxxAngelxx chapter 1 . 11/11/2006
I LUV THS STORY! i can't beleive u've only gotten 4 revews 4 it. PEOPLE MUST BE NUTS NOT 2 LIKE THIS STORY!.

anyway. i like it(duh).
TearShield Alchemist chapter 1 . 9/30/2006
This is cool.

You should post a second chapter soon, please!

~TSA
HunnyBunnyBearWithMonkeyBoxers chapter 1 . 8/21/2006
i liked it!kinda goin too fast, though... *catches apple takara threw earlier in story*APPLE!*eats it*
WarriorQu33n chapter 1 . 8/21/2006
That was so cool! I have never read anything like it before! That's why I love it! You should carry it on! That would be an awesome story! Oh and don't worry bout the chapter, now that I know what is going on i can wait :)

Black Panther Warrior
Saphira's Ember chapter 1 . 8/21/2006
You were right, this was much better than it sounded. Maybe you should add one more chapter? Its a great one shot, but I think their father needs to get more of a wakeup call. Write more fics, ok? _