Reviews for Just Be Yourself
Shade40 chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
I can't tell whether this story crossed the line of having enough new stuff to make it interesting or not. It''s pretty much a re-hash of the support conversation, but it still had enough to make it more than JUST a re-hash, but not by much. The most unique part is adding Colm to the mix. Considering the pair become friends and Colm says straight to her face that Marisa scares him, Colm's same reaction to her attempts to be sociable is reasonable. I would say that everyone is in character and the pacing feels fine. It would be nice to have more to up the interest level.
MeowSap chapter 1 . 9/4/2006
Aww! I loved the humor and romance in this! Thanks for writing a Gerik/Marisa! I do wish that some of the dialogue wasn't based on the supports, at least the very end was still well-written anyways! I did notice a few little mistakes, nothing I need to note! You did a wonderful job. Keep it up!
Phobieh chapter 1 . 8/25/2006
Awwee It was awsome! Very cute
Some guy chapter 1 . 8/21/2006
Pretty good. I liked it.