Reviews for Mistake
kristalee.keeling chapter 22 . 8/30/2012
haha, i just read this and thought that the previous part had all been a dream...
kristalee.keeling chapter 8 . 8/30/2012
I think Harry didn't see the thestrels before because he wasn't old enough to understand. It also took him over the summer. Its one thing to see death and a total different one to live it over and over and to have it constantly on your mind like it was for Harry during the summer after Cedric Died
Weaslette chapter 22 . 11/22/2011
Awesome story!Wish I could write one that well!How did you come up with it!
Callidora-Malfoy chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
love this fanfic
Silverblade11 chapter 18 . 12/25/2007
Crap! I know I read the story but I hate it when things go wrong.!
Charlee Toombs chapter 19 . 9/24/2007
Before i created my account, i was surfing Fanfic, and i actually came across your fic, i read it and loved it, but was horrible and did not review (i was using my palm at the time,) but now, i just came back to reread it since it was so awesome, i did however appease my annoyance towards the grammatical errors by editing it, the story is awesome, and i am completely willing to hand over the edited copy if you want.

p.s I'm writing chapter six, and i have discovered that my fic will EVENTUALLY consist of about 17 chapters (I'm fairly sure, but it might change, depending on length..)
yerghghh chapter 22 . 8/24/2007
so dramatic, so romantic, so well written. i especially like how you can make ten paragraphs into one! keep on using improper spacing!

-yerghghh
rpmuleftw chapter 3 . 7/9/2007
Oh, it's me again. BTW I'm just letting you know that I DID READ ALL OF IT - but after reading the "I'm an idiot!" chapter, I went back and reread the song in the 1st chapter and then the 'beginning' in the 2nd chapter. That's why it's reviewed there. Just thought you'd like to know

~Rachel
rpmuleftw chapter 2 . 7/9/2007
You write very, very well! D Kudos to you, awesome story!

A few minor and major blips were found throughout the story, though. I won't point them all out, just mention a few:

-Grammar. It's...not great. Please, we learn most of this in 2nd grade! Review!

-It's spelled "Fleur" not "Fluer"...

-Please proofread your chapters before publishing them. There are some very silly spelling mistakes that you know how to do correctly - they're typos that you just missed because you have to read through at least once or twice before publishing it.

That's about it though. Awesome story otherwise. I'm gonna check out your other ones. Bye!

~Rachel
StarsInTheSky123 chapter 5 . 7/9/2007
well, its a different side of ginny and her family, and i'm not quite sure what to say about that, but its definitely better than the whole harry/ginny cliche. i'm usually a harry/draco fan, but i've read a few of your stories and i'm starting to really like ginny/draco. keep going, its really a sad story, and the poem in the beginning almost made me cry (i thought that it was really fitting though.) Anyway, its really good.
Silverblade11 chapter 22 . 6/12/2007
Suggestion if you wanna write another story: Try putting the beginning IN the beginning. Thats about it. other than that it's very good!
Silverblade11 chapter 10 . 5/31/2007
This is really good so far. I like it.
Kim chapter 15 . 5/7/2007
this chapter is so sad!
JulieMalfoyZabini chapter 22 . 4/2/2007
This is a good fic, really sad. But good all the while. I was confused at the ending, you know the last chapter? But, when I read your Author's Note, I guess it made more sense. Anyway, good job. Really well done, although, you do have some grammar mistakes and stuff, but ah, too late now huh? lol

Anyway, keep it up!:D:)

Julie:)
JulieMalfoyZabini chapter 9 . 3/31/2007
Oh my god, I'm going to cry. I'm trying so hard to not cry. How can her father just DO that to her? *Sighs*

I'm going to keep reading this, because it's really good.

Julie:)
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