Reviews for Guardian Cross: Trail of Naught and Unknown
Guest chapter 9 . 2/23/2013
You made Sonikal work perfectly. Do you plan on Tikal bearing Sonic's children in the second story?
spikey51 chapter 2 . 7/13/2010
i loved this chapter i think i have become a full echide x tikal fan the scene was very sexy lol id like to see a story with just echide and tikal id write it myself but its your character lol
Blakelyn chapter 9 . 12/27/2009
I was laughing so hard whe it said Big Blue Cock

good job on the story 10/10
FlameAmigo619 chapter 1 . 3/7/2008
Hey hey! A SonTik pool this is interesting. Good job, man.
Royal Conquest chapter 4 . 9/1/2007
hahaha she insulted Echide, he's not very good at sex! XD
FAWcreator chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
This is as nasty as an police record
liberty the hegehog chapter 9 . 8/10/2007
This story was great
azianprincess chapter 9 . 1/11/2007
Awesome story
Wingless Rain chapter 1 . 9/25/2006
Scripted, stupid, and even sillier than your new piece.

This is why virgins shouldn't write porn.
LegendaryWeresheep chapter 9 . 9/23/2006
*Claps* Well done. I was reading, but you didn't know. And what's with everyone making Eggman more evil then what he really is? I mean, 'can control the darkness'? Not in this lifetime, pal.

Pro TailsXCosmo, yay! Oh wait, you aren't. Just going to point out that should an official Taiream ever comes around would be the second coming of Jesus. Really.

Still, Sonic and Tikal is a rare pairing. And you put in humor, to say the least. Like in the early chapters, the elders using the word "fuck". When did that word come around? Tikal's time was 30 years ago!

Just like Graham Chapman.

If you have time, try checking my stuff out. That'd be cool.

See ya.


P.S.: And I say this a lot. You need to put Anth in the next one. Anth is my OC, and I've filled plenty requests for OC's in mine, quite frankly.
Rhah the Last Warlord chapter 7 . 8/30/2006
Nice, as usual, but I just have one problem...I don't care how it is to be done, but seriously...Tails needs to do some FIGHTIN'! Tails dishing out some punishment would be good for this story! Otherwise...great, naga!
Rhah the Last Warlord chapter 6 . 8/30/2006
NAGA! Go, Inusonisha, Inusonisha, Unilimited, Unlimited! Is it a coincedence that we both have transformations in mind for our stories? NO! Great chapter, the fights were cool enough for me and the "ass-face" comment was funny.
Rhah the Last Warlord chapter 5 . 8/27/2006
Five chapters...I read through five chapters and we finally have a fight! That was pretty cool, and the dark spirit (I so don't feel like typing that name...) idea is nicely executed. Don't go yet...finish it...finish it...
Rhah the Last Warlord chapter 4 . 8/27/2006
DAMN! Normal people can't have sex that long without succumbing to something...glad to here that Tikal is okay, though...
Rhah the Last Warlord chapter 3 . 8/27/2006 sex scenes. I hope that now the elder won't be a bitch anymore, 'cause he was pissing me off with his neglegence (I have no idea if I spelled that right...) In any case, great chapter ;)
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