Reviews for Make Believe
JennCorinthos chapter 1 . 5/9/2007
OMG, OMG Danny is going to give Lindsay a heart attack... Loved this...

JENNIFER
HootyMcBoon chapter 1 . 4/7/2007
Hahah Elvis. Loved that last line.
Eliche chapter 1 . 4/2/2007
Again very nice. really liking it so far. :)
ReJo chapter 1 . 1/27/2007
“I think I’ll be the judge of when I’m being serious or not.”

Ah! Great line!
roswellwbfan chapter 1 . 11/26/2006
Man oh man do I love this part! Especially Elvis having to break them up, which I find hilarious.
FashionIsUgliness chapter 1 . 8/24/2006
Love these two stories, hope there is more to come

:) Sam
Mountiegirl chapter 1 . 8/23/2006
Great sequel Sugah, loved it!
dddynamite chapter 1 . 8/22/2006
Aw hehehe I loved it very awsomely writen!
wolfmyjic chapter 1 . 8/22/2006
That was very good. And funny

Loved:

“Danny,” Lindsay said, and she hated the way her voice trembled as she spoke, “we can’t do this.”

Danny stared at her. “Sure we can. I’ve paid. We’re good to go.”

and

"We haven't gotten to that part yet, kids."

buwahaha

~Wolfy~
Calie1 chapter 1 . 8/22/2006
There both great. I can't wait to read the next one. It's so ridiculous and kind of OC which I don't usually like but it's to cute for me not to. I can actually picture Danny starting to sweat when Lindsay calling his bluff and her freaking out when they got up to Elvis. Ironically I had just heard Cannon in D when I was reading it.
The Little Corinthian chapter 1 . 8/22/2006
Mwha. I love Elvis. That was awesome. :0P You should continue with this series, see where it takes you :0P Great job!
Mrs. Fitzgerald chapter 1 . 8/22/2006
This is an interesting spin! I like it!
meadow567 chapter 1 . 8/22/2006
I read the first story, I thought it was good. This one is really good. I'm glad you wrote it.
chili-peppers chapter 1 . 8/22/2006
Oh wow! awesome chapter this is really god well done!
Trixie7 chapter 1 . 8/21/2006
Fantastic stories - just the right amount of humour and seriousness, would love to see a one shot of reactions when they get back to NY
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