|Reviews for The Fate of One|
| Lethe101 chapter 1 . 8/22/2006
Personally I thought you were rushing through this and using half thoughts to explain it you may want to make your next chapters longer and more thought out
| mew-mew-berri chapter 1 . 8/22/2006
oh wow! one of those sibling rivalires! lovely! i like it! i think its really kool! there are a few word mistakes but i cant complaine to much! my story does to! but you had so better post chapter two! lmao update soon!
~mew mew berri (aka: the one and only Mary!)