Reviews for Metroid:Halo
Guest chapter 4 . 11/19/2015
This is better than most so far I give it a 3\5 but it cold get better pleas continue
Guest chapter 3 . 11/19/2015
I think samus told chief way to much personal info after just meeting also wich univers is this taking place in?
Guest chapter 2 . 11/19/2015
The fuel rod canon is inferior to the rocket launcher in many ways I think it dose less damage it has a slower bullet travel and in halo 2 that can lock on and heat seek
Guest chapter 3 . 11/6/2015
Though the premise of the meeting is flaws it is still a pritty good story a really huope you keep it upp
Guest chapter 1 . 11/6/2015
The way cheif sent the mesage wold work in other scie fie universe like starwars whare its relatively coming to have a ship and blaster but its notn omen in halo to find somebody in a ship just passing buy who also can fight cuvanen if cheif coldent contact the unsc who did he think he wold contact
Guest chapter 4 . 10/30/2015
That shotgun has ridiculous range if Evan a few round hit them at the end af an rock alley Evan if they right next to the ship I no its at least 1 or 2 meters hi many a real shotgun cold but not the halo shotgun
Guest chapter 3 . 10/30/2015
Yea you definitely got the background on the halo wrong btw the cuvanant didn't create the rings the dialog is also a bit stilted but you have a good idea on your hand plus this is just a pet peev but I persanaly prefer it what the 2 unaverses hadent met before the time of the fanfic but I'm still guna keep reading so keep it up. so far I give it a 3/5
Guest chapter 1 . 10/30/2015
Not bad so far better sham meny if read before hopefully it will stay that way
Sam Tavener chapter 4 . 11/3/2014
Keep it up!
FYI, my real name is:
Samus A Tavener
No joke
Wraith Five chapter 4 . 6/23/2010
I haven't actually played halo before (at least story mode), so I don't know the entire storyline, but I do know the basics. Also, there is a Halo Wiki somewhere that could help. Also, don't forget Samus' charge combos. ZAPZAPZAP. BOOM. BURN! and ... (long silence b/c of frozen enemies). AKA: Wavebuster, Super Missile, Flamethrower, and Ice Spreader. (just an idea.)
Wraith Five chapter 3 . 6/23/2010
I lolled at how her ship keeps getting damaged, then BOOM. ship damaged. LOLOLOL!
beserkerbeast chapter 4 . 8/30/2008
its pretty good so far, keep it up

Vaekrix chapter 1 . 7/29/2007
I like the concept, I can't believe I've never thought of such a thing. I just may start one inter-mixing the two as well.
Skrit chapter 1 . 7/9/2007
There is no way in hell that Master Chief would just kinda, "Hey, if, uh, you know, I could get a little help, that'd be kinda nice..." He doesn't need someone else to be a fellow gunman. He would go for it himself. Isn't that what the game is all about?

Now, if instead, you put him in a more descriptive situation, and, say, he needed to do a job in like a ship similar to the Pillar of Autumn, which required two people to do, that would make more sense. Like, say, he needs someone else working machinery in another part of the ship to blow up a halo. You know how the Arbiter and Master Chief work together without quite realizing it? Get them to do something cooperatively that's more than just gun help. Samus is more an infiltrate and reconassaince character with her morph ball and scanners, Master Chief is busting in and killing anyone. I'd reccommend putting those professions to use. MC doesn't need any help taking down any armies, he does that in his sleep. That's why he's Master Chief.

I hope my comments make sense, and I look forward to seeing what you create next, cuz I would like to see Samus and John team up.
Tankred chapter 4 . 5/24/2007
They talk too much, especially Master Chief is alwys very short in his comments.
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