Reviews for Loyalty
spi-ti-tout chapter 1 . 11/16/2006
Good one-off. Doesn't have much to do with the main theme really but that can be overlooked easily.

It seems that despite your dislike you write your stuff quite well - very solidly nailed with 'emotional temperature' - whatever kind it may be. So can we expect to see something else like this soon?

.:spi
Sumiyoshi chapter 1 . 9/19/2006
Wow.

Masterful use of the different point-of-view style, and the way all the little hints accumulated: how the main character was addressed by others, his pyromaniacal tendencies, and then the twist at the end that hits you like a ton of bricks-

Very, very well written- I'm surprised that people have passed this 'fic over, or that some people, apparently, just haven't gotten it.
Faunamon chapter 1 . 8/22/2006
(blinks) and WHY jaws, exactly?