SWEEEEET! I love the way you made finally realize in the end! I wish this had really happened. That he had had someone, someone other than his brothers to be with him. But his brothers also deserved someone as well...

This story is nice. I liked it.

its so good, though i had to read begining two times cause at first didnt realised who tald him "it isnt your home"

good chapter, especially last paragraphe - good describing of situation

again, he behave like i would on his place - but im also could understand her, its good story(though i didnt finished to read it yet)

good chapter(though on her place i wouldnt disagree with him, well in this chapter he remind of myself with my murderous desire(which i get when i saw the news like about girl commited suicide because her parents tried to force her to give birth from her rapist, or when my friend said how her stepfather beat her and groped her, or when my other friend said how her relatives tried to rape her during her visit to them and her parents said she deserved it - in these times i wished world really could be destroyed) as well)also i disagree with OC about that pain makes joys brighter - usually pain overwhelming everything, though its double-sided question of course

Really sweet I always felt bad for the 3 boys. Kadaj was so lost they all were. Glad he got a happy ending

I liked this, it was very cute Wish it had more reviews but people always seem to avoid stories with OC characters paired with favorites. I loved it :)

what a sweet story i love it

well done. I really enjoyed this story

As this story was complete...I'd thought I'd review it once i read all of it...which is what I'm doing xD

This was great and I loved the end xD

A beautiful peice of work. Minor spelling errors but even those could not take away a bit of the pure beauty and grace of this writing. I am anxious to read more of your work.

wow, that was good and cute