Reviews for Pokemon Revolution
ihateslash604 chapter 3 . 11/6/2016
Wow, I heard Ash was OOC in this fic, but he seems pretty in character so far. Too bad he's in this fic... and like all badfics, he's going to be warped beyond recognition. Oh Ash, if only you were in better story...
Also, this was written even before Ruby and Sapphire? Oh the irony... Oh author, author, little did your naive little brain know at the time that you were writing a Team Plasma propaganda piece. Yep, I've found the true identity of this little vile piece of Grimer sludge, everyone; a bedtime story Ghethis read to N as part of his brainwashing. It's like I'm reading N's nightmares, it's uncanny. It just all fits perfectly. You know what? When I write fics, one of my specific intentions is smashing the entire premise of this fic into a million pieces. I'm all for darker Pokémon stories. But there's dark, and there's grimdark. This is grimdark. And I hate grimdark like you won't believe.
*sigh* Did the Defenders of the Canon Continuum (I think that's what they were called?) get to this thing yet? I hope they did. I think some of their Pokémon agents will have some choice words for this. Not only does this... thing show a painful case of blissful, willful sticking fingers in one's ears and missing the point shouting lalalsla, but our "hero" is a Mary Sue of puke-inducing degrees, there are writing errors sprinkled all over the place, and oh yeah, GRIMDARK FOR THE EDGY!1!
But oh, what am I saying, GameFreak has provided us the ultimate destruction of this gross misunderstanding of this franchise, even before this fic was published. I only need one thing to shatter everything this fic stands for.
*thriws a Pokeball into the air, sending out an Unfezant* Peace!
*points* USE RETURN!
Axel Grease chapter 1 . 6/22/2016
I hate this story so much. "Pokémon training/humans is/are evil" is the only thing you can write when you write about Pokémon. Eon is a sociopath, that trial was rigged and unfair, and you're a misandrist misanthrope who needs to be launched into the sun!
Subject 666 chapter 2 . 1/23/2016
Interesting idea...
Black Twilight Wolf chapter 17 . 2/24/2014
And so after a long war the pokemon won.
Black Twilight Wolf chapter 12 . 2/24/2014
Onto the next chapter
Black Twilight Wolf chapter 11 . 2/24/2014
Victory for the rebellion. WOOOOOOOOO

Onto the next chapter.
Black Twilight Wolf chapter 10 . 2/24/2014
i guess the Pokemon teleported into the stadium.

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Black Twilight Wolf chapter 9 . 2/24/2014
Meowth is so funny.

Onto the Next Chapter.
Black Twilight Wolf chapter 8 . 2/23/2014
Onto the next chapter.
Black Twilight Wolf chapter 7 . 2/23/2014
Mewtwo is so awesome and yaay Team Rocket got one of there bases destroyed.

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Black Twilight Wolf chapter 6 . 2/23/2014
Cool chapter

Onto the Next chapter.
Black Twilight Wolf chapter 5 . 2/23/2014
Pokemon win there first Victory of the day.

Onto the next chapter.
Black Twilight Wolf chapter 4 . 2/23/2014
Time for the Revolution to begin.

onto the next Chapter.
Black Twilight Wolf chapter 3 . 2/23/2014
Pikachu telling the truth.

And Team Rocket was in there, Jessie, Jame and Meowth. Those three are funny.

Onto the Next Chapter.
Black Twilight Wolf chapter 2 . 2/23/2014
Alright Go Eon.
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