Reviews for FF4: The Story
Laguna's twin sister chapter 7 . 4/28/2007
Wai! that was so cool. Although, i personally think it needed an epilogue. I loved it. Aw... Kain and Sara were so cute together. I hope you write more!
PRIVATE chapter 7 . 8/26/2006
Hum, the ending was a bit anitclimatic but it serves its purpose. Meanwhile, let me talk about the rest of your story...

Darn it, has anyone told you that you are freaking awesome?

No? Well then, I must do this then...

You are are are are awesome.

You are are are are awesome.

You are are are are awesome.

(rinse, wash and repeat for about a couple of hours)

Well...You are! Congratualations on this story of absolute awesomeness. Well written;An excellent plot;Damn good and and and... I'm flustered right now, pardon me.

I must cut this review short for the lack of a better word.

For the hope that yellow chocobos may fly one day.

Menolly chapter 7 . 8/24/2006
That was awesome! _*

I admit I doubted it for a bit but, now I'm glad I stuck with it.

Good luck with your writing career! ~_*

Menolly chapter 1 . 8/24/2006
Hm. Very deep.

Hard to form too much an opinion yet because I've never read your stuff before and not TOO much has happened yet. So far, I like it though.