Reviews for Cicatrix
PandylBas chapter 2 . 2/26/2009
Is there more than this or is this the last chapter?
PandylBas chapter 1 . 2/26/2009
Even though it came from an unlikely person, i think rosalie did the right thing.
Lazielow chapter 2 . 1/22/2009
Please update soon.
Nikkipedia chapter 1 . 1/3/2009
This story is one of few that I go back to read, it's that good.

I envy your writing. (:
jongdae chapter 2 . 12/28/2008
oh, i love rose.

i love this.
jongdae chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
wow. so bloody awesome.
geophf chapter 1 . 11/25/2008
Wow. Just wow!

One has the wonder, in the books, at the concern at becoming a vampire, where every detail is implied, hinted at, but never voiced.

Rosalie gave these evils a voice. A screaming shriek of a voice of the interminable despair of forever quenched only by blood and nothing.


Even in her prima donna outburst one can hear Rosalie beg Bella to see her choice seriously. Edward begs Bella to keep her humanity but hurts her by withholding the harsh finalities of eternity. Rosalie is giving Bella a gift, the gift of wisdom earned by her own cold walk through forever. Without Rosalie's tirade, Bella may have the comfort of regret reflecting on her decision made centuries ago. Now, when she chooses Edward FOREVER, she chooses him with open eyes.

Thank you, Rosalie. Thank you, Rhiann, for breathing life into this tale.

TwoRubySlippers chapter 2 . 10/24/2008
well done getting right into rosalie's head like that. a very interesting new take on the whole thing.

she's so mean and sad sometimes!
ILeftMyHeartInLondon chapter 2 . 10/21/2008
Wow, this was amazing! Everyone was very well in character and it was great insight into Rosalie's head! :)
cmtlxxx chapter 2 . 10/1/2008
Wow! you are a great writer, and plz continue ! its really cute ,

i like ,
PurpleMatter chapter 2 . 9/10/2008
I read this a very, very long while ago. And it was after reading this I decided I absolutely hated fanfiction, because there was NOTHING, NOTHING like this, nothing so true and powerful and blunt and sharp. And nothing SO Rosalie.

And it was after reading this I became strongly pro-Rose, and so strongly anti-bite my friends would tease me about it. Breaking Dawn...I don't like the situations the characters were forced into, and Bella's superawesomeness as a vampire is such crap. I mean, I loved the book, but it went against just everything in this story, and that bothered me.

It bothered me that, two years previously, I read a short story (that completely changed my opinion on the Twilight saga) which was not canon to Breaking Dawn. No, it didn't bother me that YOURS was different to it - it bothered me that BREAKING DAWN was different.

If you ever write a book...-shakes head-
Wotcher-Tonks chapter 2 . 8/28/2008
wonderful- loved the part about the rules of personal grooming.
MissNebraskaLIVE chapter 2 . 7/26/2008
Oh my god. I have no words.

This is, hands down, the best thing that I've read on FanFiction.
his babi seal chapter 1 . 7/13/2008
wow, beautifully written. i can really feel rosalie's pain in this, and i feel like i can understand her point of view a lot better. awesome!
mb chapter 2 . 6/26/2008
Cicatrix is certainly a well focused perspective on Rosalie. Your writing is wonderful and fun to read (I enjoyed the remark about the commandments of the metrosexual male) and Rosalie does of course have a point-Edward has no plan and Bella has no idea of what she's getting into but it is after all their own choice. Rosalie's car oriented threats were... unique. Thanks for writing (I learned a new word)!

75 | « Prev Page 1 2 3 4 .. Last Next »