Reviews for Golden Linings |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Re-reading this |
![]() ![]() The idea that both 'legend' and 'canon' are somewhat true would be an interesting twist. Well, with the 'legend' being a convenient story made because the Shimeru tribe came across the pools. Where one of them drowned in one of the pools, and the tribe found out the details. Would have been interesting of an idea if Ranma had ended up getting that as a curse, but it never coming up due to chance/quirk. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly, I like the general idea for this fic, but the pacing is kinda terrible and the alternate characterizations aren't done very well. It is just a fanfic though so meh. I feel like I'd love this story if you decided to rewrite it after gaining a bit more writing experience. |
![]() ![]() ![]() SWEET:). Loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() My one gripe - the love potion used on Kuno and Mousse. I wished there'd been some resolution of that. Besides that, I absolutely loved this story. Thank you for writing and sharing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a fun read. I always did figure poor Ranma would have to end up with someone who has as many gender issues as he does. Ja. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wood have liked ranma to have be come friends with kodachi and to hear from her prospective seeing as in the first chapter you sed that she found out that ranma and ranko are the same person but dose not make an actual appearance in the story that's my only real complaint. while reading the first chapter I got a little squeee. happy at the thought of ranma Getting married. OK a lot squeee happy she's my favorite and I think they make the best and cutest couple you should Wright a kodachixranma story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Definitely an interesting take on both worlds good story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story ne |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story. Legally, do either female Ranma or Futana-kun actually exist(in the story)? Creating identities isn't easy. You'd have to know the right people or something and I'm not sure a celebrity or a securit company would cut it. This would probably mean that they would only be able to get married as their birth genders(unless it's an unofficial wedding). But whatever. Them getting married as their non-birth genders is a funny thought. I think you should continue this where they have a kid(it would be funny if Ranma got pregnant the first time they had sex with Ranma being the girl(because of a busted condom or something)and the kid be born with a permanant form of the Jusenkyo curse merged with the genetic gender bending). |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man I cant wait to read how ranma gets revenge. I really hope u make those b!tches pay |
![]() ![]() ![]() excellent story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not bad, not bad at all. A good way to spend a few hours. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well... After a second reading many years later, I can say the story is still very good. Not as good as I remember it to be, but I guess time has to do with my opinion now. I do think you made Futana less of a perverted womanizer here, but it works with the story, I had some trouble thinking Nodoka was a viable martial artist, but it does work for the plot. Overall, I think the story works well as an AU, and I also think it is a great read, so hopefully more people will read it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... I had no idea this story was here. I remember reading it way back when the Penultimate Ranma Fanfic Archive was still active. I liked the concept quite a lot back then, but for one reason or another I never got to read it again. It is great to see this fanfic in this page, as it is very good. I'll read it again for sure, and I'll be glad to add it to my favorites. |