Reviews for End Of The Line
gonzalezjonathan862 chapter 2 . 4/17
PLZ update!
Kenjo chapter 2 . 8/23/2010
Ack! What? No... Don't stop there.. Update this please!
Elemeffayoh chapter 2 . 5/25/2008
yeha yeah yeah tsunade and naruto!
Elemeffayoh chapter 1 . 5/25/2008
nice
keyblade-18 chapter 2 . 4/26/2007
Great story. Very creative and well writen. I see its been a very long time since you update. I really hope you continue this. Anyways good job so far, and I hope you date soon.

Keyblade
Yaraslava Rada chapter 2 . 4/24/2007
Good story! Update soon please!
Numba1 chapter 2 . 2/3/2007
It's been quite a while since this was last updated, and I admit that I actually missed it when it was first released but I thought I would take the time now as if another update wsa coming.

Also, how can you leave us hanging with such a cliffhanger, you gotta show us the chuunin exam, give us a just a 'little' drama and show us why Naurto deserves the title Rokudaime.

Thanks a bunch for another great story, although I'm still dying for another couple of chapters of THE CLASHING.
gof22 chapter 2 . 1/8/2007
I hope you update this story soon. It is very good. You are a great author. I can't wait for the next chapter. I just know it will be excellent. Also Will Sakura begin to love Naruto in this? If she does how will Naruto take it? Like will he not pay attention to her like she did to him?
Megii of Mysteri OusStranger chapter 2 . 12/3/2006
YAYA! This is great! Update when you get the chance!
dreamlifter chapter 2 . 10/19/2006
liked the warm hearted tone of the story...but naruto getting picked so fast?

I was kinda hoping to see how Naruto interacted with his team, especially Kira. there was a gold mine of potential there. But its looking like thats not the focus of the story, more like Naruto and his interactions with his peers (especially team 7)
dreamlifter chapter 1 . 10/19/2006
Loved the premise. thought the chapter was mostly... i dunno, didn't feel right. But once Shika, Neji and Naruto as Jounin instructors came into play, its like the story just flew. I think its the ackwardness of the team 7 breaking up, that gave that feeling. While the jounin instructors was just funny and very interesting.

First glance at all the OCs, they're very interesting. Especially Naruto's group
Hiei's Cute Girl chapter 2 . 9/29/2006
Nice story! Please do update soon!
Prosthetic Forehead chapter 2 . 9/7/2006
Interesting. Since you're not focusing on Naruto's team, nor Naruto's challenge to become Hokage, I wonder what this fic will really be about? Team 7?
the sadistic homicidal child chapter 2 . 8/31/2006
HMYGOD! NARUTO'S GOING TO BE HOKAGE! *HAPPYDANCE* YE! I can't wait to see how Naruto's students turned out! 3 PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I'M ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT HERE!
JohnnyG chapter 2 . 8/31/2006
Nice chapter. Keep up the good work.

Best,

JohnnyG
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