Reviews for Limbocide
October Autumn chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
Hey!I hope you didn't give up on this 's trully wonderful and would be a shame to see a story like this die...
Butterfly Will Be Free chapter 10 . 1/2/2009
Man. It takes me about two years to finally review for this.

I read this a long time ago, back when you updated. I hope you pick this up again. I really do like this fanfic, and want to see where you would go with it.

-V
Agggghhheptonygm chapter 10 . 3/26/2008
This impressed me deeply. It was convincing and well-crafted enough that I forgot I was reading a fanfic. You've certainly captured the mood and ambience of PA, albeit in a more Westernised context.

You've also got Dream Island Obsessional Park stuck in my head for the next nine hours.
DeviousxXxSmile chapter 10 . 12/17/2007
Loved it. Please update soon!
BloodySuicide chapter 10 . 11/24/2007
Omg...You literily got me sitting on the edge of my seat there. Poor Michael...T_T

Anyway! Great story! Update son! _
TokiMekiWakuKun chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
oh. my. god. this was the most awesome thing i've ever read in my whole entire life other than the horror book house. jesus christ! :D oh my god cant stop freaking out
socioNycto chapter 8 . 4/26/2007
Let me start by saying I feel like an idiot for reviewing this a full two months after you last updated, but I had to. (Besides, it was on the front page of the Paranoia Agent fics. If it can catch my attention that easily, I'm sure I'm allowed to review it at any time.)

Whoa-oh. You've got yourself quite the storyline. It has the feeling of an elaborate, interconnected plot and let me tell you, that feeling is wonderful. The characters are well filled out, and even though we don't know much about the 'narrator' of sorts, anyone can see some bits of his personality showing even in that first-person format.

Carla's story is so...real, for lack of a better word, that my mind completely accepted it. I've been tricked into believing I know her personally.

Your style is hard to describe. It's fluent and natural, as if some magic had taken the story by force and transmuted it into words. Each word fits, too, every single one seems necessary and exact. I don't know what kind of style that is, but I love it.

I'm not expecting you to update this at all, I just felt like I should give my two cents worth after reading something so amazing. Thanks for putting it up here. Really, thanks for letting me read it.
Asuka Langley-Soryu chapter 7 . 2/19/2007
I absolutely loved this story - I really hope you plan on continuing it!

While we haven't seen too many characters yet, they seem nice and well-rounded. Carla, especially, is a 3-D person whose struggle is convincing and sympathetic. You managed to capture her fight for her sanity perfectly, and this is one of the few PA fics I have read that is actually frightening. Captain Nature is a very enjoyable opposition - someone I love to hate.

I also liked your style of writing. I can't really describe what I liked, but...it works. It's marvelous. Bravo!

The plot is intriguing. I look forward to reading more of it.

All in all, a great work. I know it's a bit late to be reviewing, but this deserves so much more praise than I can give. Might you consider returning to it, sometime?

- Asuka Langley-Soryu, Second Child
The Famous Son chapter 2 . 9/1/2006
wow this is starting to get freaky...
The Famous Son chapter 1 . 9/1/2006
wow that was great. That shadow cop guy must have a intersteing life...or is he dead too?... now i giving my elf a headache.

But anyway, That was awsome!