Reviews for the girl in the shower
BlazexFlame chapter 1 . 1/30/2008
lmao XD

Is this a comercial? XD

Holy crap, that was funny XD

Good job, really

Miriam chapter 1 . 12/10/2006
Haha cute!

I think it's good as a one shot, although change the last sentence if it is because it makes it sound like it will be more than that.
sunny tuesday chapter 1 . 10/11/2006
that was cool! I liked the shampoo twist, although I think you should have it rated at least

Fairy Love chapter 1 . 8/29/2006
hahahahaha that was good!
WeasleyIsOurKing7 chapter 1 . 8/25/2006
good one! cute
SummerBaby94 chapter 1 . 8/25/2006
r u going to write anymore or is there only goin to be one chapter?
Hotduelist chapter 1 . 8/25/2006
That's so funny. maybe you should do a second part with more inclusded or something