Reviews for Angels Fall First
ANON chapter 5 . 3/27/2014
shame your not continuing this story Its good I like the idea of kyo and jo together just because its something different I think there are only like 3 or 4 in this entire section
TherealJO chapter 5 . 4/16/2011
What got my blood boiling wasn't the fact that you took liberties with the characters... my comment was on your authors note and the way ypu flamed others. Glad ur grown now...maybe u can write and show others u have matured. Ps . Glad u read the manga
THEREALJO chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
First of all ditz is not spelled dits. Second of all kid if you knew ANYTHING about these characters you would have read the manga and found out the writer makes no secret Jo and Meg are a a couple. And third : it's fine if you wanna write "something diffrent" but don't be a child and whine when people don't like what you like . It seriously shows your maturity level , which we can all tell is that of a 8 year old.
ArtemusLyn chapter 4 . 3/4/2009
Although kyo/jo parings are far-fetched it's always fun to see how it would work out. that being said I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
lady sesshomaru-sama chapter 4 . 10/13/2008
i love it !
kazumaryuho chapter 1 . 1/10/2008
you did a good job so far with this story but why haven't you finished? you gave me a good idea for a jo and kyohei story i'm writing now your doing a great job don't stop please update i was thinking are you going to put more of a relationship with jo and kyohei in the next chapter?
blackdeathmessenger chapter 4 . 11/25/2007
pretty good story,i'm glad someone has finally broken away from the lesbianism that seems to be going around with everyone elses stories
aaron kirmse chapter 4 . 11/15/2007
i liked it the relationship between someone other than meg was good keep the story going its really interesting i want to know what happens
Napster chapter 4 . 5/9/2007
Good story!

Looking up for more of this. this couple is cool (and i already tired of joXmeg stuff)

update soon
Silntjr chapter 4 . 2/27/2007
I like this story, there really is to much jo and meg, sure it's understandabel, but it get's tireing (not sure I spelled that right). I like the idea of a kyoheixjo pairing, it's cool and original in this section. Also, are you going to use parts of the anime in this, I mean, after Kyohei tells Jo his name, will episodes after that take place in the story. Please update soon
zaltais chapter 4 . 11/17/2006
please update soon, it's an awesome story
Kalis-nin chapter 3 . 9/13/2006
awesome! just got back to this story, and it is great. the cliff though! Arrg! This is something I am looking forward to reading more about though. Great can't wait for the next update don't listen to evysilverfox plz.
EvySilverFox chapter 3 . 9/9/2006
_...It's good but I like MegJo pairings more. :p
TheNameIsJo chapter 3 . 9/6/2006
So I come back from con. ,right? And what do I find? This cliff hanger! Ah! I must know what happens next! Update soon PLEASE!
EvySilverFox chapter 1 . 9/3/2006
Umm...It was good an all but...could you do a MegJo story instead.
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