Reviews for Fragments
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
This was written before the reveal!? I find it was a good theory. And a bit cute story. Much less heartaching with Tobi being innocent.
Cute Kirby chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
From the perspective of someone in 2013, when Tobi's identity has been revealed, both the fic and the reviews are hilarious. Who would have thought that the "crack" theory turned out to be the only accurate part of this? Anachronisms, whether intended or not, are marvelous things.
LadyoftheShield chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
Wow! This is amazing! I wholeheartedly support Tobito. I love the angst you have here!

One error: Obito was "killed" in Grass country. The bridge they had to destroy was a main part of Iwa's supply line, but it was in Graas.

Wonderful, wonderful job! And so sad...
thedreadedlurgy chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
So... beautiful...

-begins to cry-

I kind of think that they SHOULD have made Tobi Obito. I mean, look at their names! TOBI is OBITO scrambled up with an extra "o"- and it would have been even more interesting than Madara. ;)

Great oneshot. Keep writing! _
anbumoo chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
Aw. This was touching and sad, and it made me feel really really sorry for Tobito, but I really like it! Great job!
Vivian Verbose chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
Hahaha! Lovely!

I loved the way you wrote this. It totally sounds like the way Tobi would talk.

Your end note was pretty funny. :P

Thanks for an awesome read!

Anc chapter 1 . 2/3/2008
I loved your endnotes almost as much as the story. "Together, they kick ass. Dysfunctionally." LMFAO XD
Muria chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
Tobi needs a hug! This is such a sweet view of the poor little guy... It's well-written, too. At least Tobi keeps hope...
darklace15 chapter 1 . 1/1/2008
Oh...Crack theory or not, you explained it amazingly. Perfect.
kawaii chibi shun chapter 1 . 4/17/2007
Well, this theory is far from proven, but there is a little evidence to support it, and it hasn't been disproven at any rate. I personally quite like the theory, and your interpretation of it. Congratulations on a one shot well written; it was a fun read.
Alori Kesi Aldercy chapter 1 . 4/11/2007
Tobi! xDD Yay.

This is also my theory, and I stand behind it 100 percent.

This was as beautifully in-character as your recent KurenaixAsuma. Loved that one-love this one.

Great stuff.

Eldr-Fire chapter 1 . 2/14/2007
Ah, the Obitobi theory is my guilty pleasure. Think of all of the Kakashi drama that would ensue if it turned out that Tobi really was Obito and the two of them fought or something... o.O Ahem. My fangirl-esque Kakashi theories aside, that was a very good piece and showed a serious side that I don't usually attribute to Tobi. It was slightly creepy, but not in a bad way. Good job!
yangires chapter 1 . 1/2/2007
Aw, this was great! I wish I could find more Obitobi stuff.. TT
Ujikofuda chapter 1 . 11/12/2006
Oh dang. That was pretty sweet. . Poor Tobi. u.u
koswarg chapter 1 . 10/15/2006
Great fic! Obito is w00bie, and I really hope he's not dead, because I miss him so. x)
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