Reviews for The Biju Biju Fruit |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for updating. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello, I am the owner of the channel six paths and I like your Mha stories a lot, so I am here to ask your if I can use your story for my video, I will give all the credits and the link of the story. and will mention your name in the description as author. I will be waiting for your response. By the way nice work on the story. Thankyou. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I wasn't expecting to find a fanfic this long running. Time to start reading! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Looks like Naruto and Neji still have a few things to sort out with each other, which they can do the next time they see each other. Sorry Neji, but Hinata wanted to do what she wanted to do, not what other people wanted her to do. I wonder if Naruto saw Sabo's ship being sunk by that World Noble |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool chapter continue please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() excellent work on this chapter and man that got deep 0-0 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good job please continue the story your doing amazing work |
![]() ![]() Is there a sequel? |
![]() ![]() Are still continuing this fanfic was amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Esta bueno |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for updating. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry for taking so long to read and review. Life wasn't nice to me recently, and been working on getting my motivation back to read and write stuff. *sighs* Finally getting to the end of all the updates I had missed out on due to both that and my laptop breaking down. So, Ace seems to have given up, while Naruto and Luffy haven't. Boa has asically made her feelings for Luffy very public, and Naruto has just pissed Neji off. WE'll see how that goes next chapter, wont we? Keep up the awesome work! |
![]() ![]() Nami okay guys if we need to save sanji and ino we need plan before we go Naruto okay luffy we have plan let go Luffy alright here we go Sakura okays go you heard nami we need plan Hinata oh guys Nami yeah hinata Hinata they jumped As everyone look that luffy and naruto jumped Usopp they jumped Nami and Sakura what Zoro alright one for all Sasuke finally some action Usopp wait we don’t know the plan Kiba we do have plan let jumped Usopp wait Choji alright let go Shikamaru well are gonna jump anyway Sakura and nami look each other and sight Nami I can’t believe we have to this Sakura me neither So they jumped except for usopp who was scared Luffy and Naruto landed successfully and fist bump each other Luffy alright we made it Naruto alright hope the others jumped Kurama don’t worry kids they jumped but I don’t about usopp thought Naruto wha you mean They see sasuke and zoro successfully Luffy hey guys it seemed that you made it Zoro yeah but I don’t about you two Naruto what you mean So both luffy and Naruto got hit by nami and sakura Naruto what that for Nami for almost killed us Luffy so you made it Sakura yeah but still Kiba oh guys it seemed that usopp didn’t jumped with rest up the crew made it Naruto where it then Meanwhile usopp was still scared for jumped so he decided encouraging Usopp okay usoppp you can do this you have believe oka ahh believe sucks Choji guys it seemed he falling fast Robin it appears he won’t make it Naruto quick someone catch him Sasuke on it So sasuke helps usopp Nice catch Don’t mention it |
![]() ![]() Um…" said Hinata. "What is it?" asked Ino. "Naruto and Luffy are gone." Said Hinata. They saw that the two had left. "WHAT!" yelled Paulie, "Don't they know anything about strategy!" This has the same energy as, “Um dudes? What? He jumped. He jumped?!” |