So they arrived..but will it change things?" Or will things proceed as they do in canon (from what I've heard)? Guess we'll see.

Good work, keep it up.

That was quite a chapter, and I look forward to the next one. It'll be interesting who the scared marine Vice Admiral is (though I have a hunch) and lets hope that Naruto and Luffy don't piss off Whiteboard too much

Garp really was a bad parent/guardian for Dragon Luffy and Ace to turn against World Government. I'm thinking Dragon only allowed Garp to look after Luffy because he knew Luffy be safer with his grandfather than with the revolutionary army, especially considering Garp took in Ace who was son of Gol D. Rogers, since as proven when Dragon took in Sabo, he could have gotten Luffy any time.

Nice chapter. Also is Neji not part of the war? I mean hes an apprentice of Smoker. Also are you going to reveal Minato as Naruto's father?

epic job on this chapter

Cool chapter continue please.

While incredible to see your dedication to this work of fiction I think you absolutely should feel free to take a break to not keep writing this. You're not obligated to do so, and while I have fun reading it I believe the health and happiness of an author is more important than the work in any case.

Awesome work

Thanks for updating. :)

Well the fight has begun, it looks to be going somewhat badly for the pirates. Guess we'll see what happens when Luffy's group arrives.

Awesome

Looking forward to how things will go, when everyone from Impel Down arrive to help fight against the Marines (and it'll be interesting how Naruto'll be able to help)

Cool chapter continue please.

excellent work on this chapter

Update?