Reviews for The Biju Biju Fruit |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for updating. :) |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry for taking so long to read and review. Life wasn't nice to me recently, and been working on getting my motivation back to read and write stuff. *sighs* Finally getting to the end of all the updates I had missed out on due to both that and my laptop breaking down. So, Ace seems to have given up, while Naruto and Luffy haven't. Boa has asically made her feelings for Luffy very public, and Naruto has just pissed Neji off. WE'll see how that goes next chapter, wont we? Keep up the awesome work! |
![]() ![]() Nami okay guys if we need to save sanji and ino we need plan before we go Naruto okay luffy we have plan let go Luffy alright here we go Sakura okays go you heard nami we need plan Hinata oh guys Nami yeah hinata Hinata they jumped As everyone look that luffy and naruto jumped Usopp they jumped Nami and Sakura what Zoro alright one for all Sasuke finally some action Usopp wait we don’t know the plan Kiba we do have plan let jumped Usopp wait Choji alright let go Shikamaru well are gonna jump anyway Sakura and nami look each other and sight Nami I can’t believe we have to this Sakura me neither So they jumped except for usopp who was scared Luffy and Naruto landed successfully and fist bump each other Luffy alright we made it Naruto alright hope the others jumped Kurama don’t worry kids they jumped but I don’t about usopp thought Naruto wha you mean They see sasuke and zoro successfully Luffy hey guys it seemed that you made it Zoro yeah but I don’t about you two Naruto what you mean So both luffy and Naruto got hit by nami and sakura Naruto what that for Nami for almost killed us Luffy so you made it Sakura yeah but still Kiba oh guys it seemed that usopp didn’t jumped with rest up the crew made it Naruto where it then Meanwhile usopp was still scared for jumped so he decided encouraging Usopp okay usoppp you can do this you have believe oka ahh believe sucks Choji guys it seemed he falling fast Robin it appears he won’t make it Naruto quick someone catch him Sasuke on it So sasuke helps usopp Nice catch Don’t mention it |
![]() ![]() Um…" said Hinata. "What is it?" asked Ino. "Naruto and Luffy are gone." Said Hinata. They saw that the two had left. "WHAT!" yelled Paulie, "Don't they know anything about strategy!" This has the same energy as, “Um dudes? What? He jumped. He jumped?!” |
![]() ![]() ![]() wait, isn't the Biju Biju fruit eaten by Naruto useless considering he already has a jinchuriki in him? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I finally got caught up with a story of a whole now. I like how things are going since my last review but since I’m behind on the series from when Boa Hancock showed up in it I’m going to be rather lost here and there but going to enjoy what I read when this story gets updated. Sad it might be a year before it gets updated again though. I hope that writers block goes away at some point and you can work on this again like you use to. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Since I started reading this story I kept wondering if something like this would happen and what excatly you had in mind for how things would go. I’m very much looking forward to learning just what you have in mind from here on out. I do wonder if you added Naruto’s mom as well like how canon Naruto series did as well though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() All I can say is that it’s about time they finally confess without something stupid to ruin the moment. I was actually on the verge of smashing my head against something if it didn’t happen soon to. Geez. I do like how it happened though. That was a nice moment. Not as great as some of the other moments were but still nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() considering this is a major arc you could lengthen the chapters to get everything in one shot instead segmenting them into smaller chunks. That said Neji is pissed now |
![]() ![]() Please lets see Jinbei kick Moria's ass, that's my favourite part of the Marineford arc. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m actually having trouble remembering if the Going Merry’s end was one of the safest part of the series for me or if there was another part that was from what I remember seeing. I’m glad it was added here as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hidan is one of few I really hate to no end because of how annoying I always found him. Sooner he is taken out the better as far as I care. I really can’t wait to catch up to this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok. I have lost track of how many times my eye as twitched with the moment between Naruto and Hinata getting interrupted like that. Just how many more chapters till they finally confess or have they still not done so after 382 chapters now. *sigh* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah. I actually saw that coming. I wish I knew how I did but I just had this awful feeling Hinata would have been chosen. I hate that and wonder what happens next. |