Um…" said Hinata.
"What is it?" asked Ino.
"Naruto and Luffy are gone." Said Hinata.
They saw that the two had left.
"WHAT!" yelled Paulie, "Don't they know anything about strategy!"

This has the same energy as, “Um dudes? What? He jumped. He jumped?!”

wait, isn't the Biju Biju fruit eaten by Naruto useless considering he already has a jinchuriki in him?

I finally got caught up with a story of a whole now. I like how things are going since my last review but since I’m behind on the series from when Boa Hancock showed up in it I’m going to be rather lost here and there but going to enjoy what I read when this story gets updated.

Sad it might be a year before it gets updated again though. I hope that writers block goes away at some point and you can work on this again like you use to.

Since I started reading this story I kept wondering if something like this would happen and what excatly you had in mind for how things would go. I’m very much looking forward to learning just what you have in mind from here on out. I do wonder if you added Naruto’s mom as well like how canon Naruto series did as well though.

All I can say is that it’s about time they finally confess without something stupid to ruin the moment. I was actually on the verge of smashing my head against something if it didn’t happen soon to. Geez. I do like how it happened though. That was a nice moment. Not as great as some of the other moments were but still nice.

considering this is a major arc you could lengthen the chapters to get everything in one shot instead segmenting them into smaller chunks. That said Neji is pissed now

Please lets see Jinbei kick Moria's ass, that's my favourite part of the Marineford arc.

I’m actually having trouble remembering if the Going Merry’s end was one of the safest part of the series for me or if there was another part that was from what I remember seeing. I’m glad it was added here as well.

Hidan is one of few I really hate to no end because of how annoying I always found him. Sooner he is taken out the better as far as I care. I really can’t wait to catch up to this story.

Ok. I have lost track of how many times my eye as twitched with the moment between Naruto and Hinata getting interrupted like that. Just how many more chapters till they finally confess or have they still not done so after 382 chapters now. *sigh*

Yeah. I actually saw that coming. I wish I knew how I did but I just had this awful feeling Hinata would have been chosen. I hate that and wonder what happens next.

published on 2006 and still updating? that's some
G.O.A.T stuff right there

Ya know. I was actually thinking that Shikamaru and Choji would have also joined with the straw hats as well. Wouldn’t have been at all if all the rookie 9 ended up on one ship together. Including Shino whenever the heck he shows up.

Oh yeah. This is my very first time reading this story and I’m just commenting as I go when I felt needed. Though I would still have said what I have if I read it from the start. Oh well.

Can you also add lee neji tenten temari kankuru shino and sai maybe

Can you also add with dragon ball and my hero academia remastered