Aw, Naruto won't get to see Luffy kick Kreig's slimy ass! Question, was Kyuubi big enough that if he could be given a physical body he could swim faster than most of the boats outside the grand line?

cool

it's good

well, that was interesting

short, but interesting

please use my idea

SEE YA

YEAY! PLEASE UPDATE!

Great start. It's going to be very interseting to see how these two go about their respective goals while traveling together.

Good work.

Good Chapter. But is Ino's fruit a Paramecia, A Logia, or a Zoan. I know it ain't a Zoan or a Logia, but It doesn't seem to be a Paramecia. Since that type alters the users body in some way, like Luffy Gomu Gomu powers, and Buggy's Bara Bara powers. Ino's Soul Soul No Mi doesn't seem to do any of that. Could you tell me what type of Fruit it is.

Later Days

NewSon

Nice crossover of Naruto characters into One Piece. Since Gaara was somewhat refer to earlier I take it he will appear later on. There was a desert part if I recall, not too familiar with One Piece after Rogue Town. Wouldn't be surprise if Kisame was related or involve with Arlong, being another sharkman.

Interesting story. I like the way you have everyone interacting and I eagerly await the arrival of more of the Naruto characters, especially Hinata! Will Haku be appearing also?

This is hilarious! I wonder why I didn't know of this sooner!

So far you've combined everything in Naruto and One Piece perfectly. I was actually surprised to hear Kakashi as a Kage. I thought it was going to be Jiraya or something like that.

Also, do you plan on proofreading your chapters in the future? I know that you don't want a beta-reader, but please try proofreading it, the computer can only do so much...

Story Rank: A-

it's good

well, that was interesting

so are u going to use my idea with the fire

SEE YA

interesting please update soon.

FREAKING AWSOME SO FAR

sorry but this is realy buging me their names are spelled zolo (i think) and kyuubi.