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   Mrtakeiteasy chapter 10 . 9/13/2006 Yup, i'm back to review, and i never leave one liners saying to update but leave comments...WAHAHAHAHAH lol... Seems like following the storyline still, thats good. I didn't exactly expect to see Konohamaru there, but he didn't really speak much so i got confused when you said 4 people ran away. I thought one was Kiba, so i was like ? lol You got Kiba's personality pretty well, I think, but he doesn't argue as much with Naruto as it seems lol hehe. But thats ok, but i wonder why he allows Usopp to continue with his I'M Captain Usopp! lol...funny, then again, Usopp is a chicken when it comes to fighting lol...and then Kiba is a fight o holic like the rest...it'll just be freaky right when you get sanji. If you ever get to Arabasta, omg...it's going to be hell writing the fanfic lol with how many characters that come with each scenario...And trying to think of more people so every person can fight against too. And it's going to be hell if you decide to write till the skypiea arc...well even to the rainboy arc would be hell haha... I'll read at the next update...i'll review if i read your update before you make the next one lol |
| lambtastic chapter 10 . 9/13/2006 oh ho coolio! whao that kinda rhymed! haha when are they gonna meet hinata chan? can it be when they meet sanji cause hinata is a great cook! they can be adopted sibs! like when the ship sank only sanji and the head chief survived how about hinata survived too! then thats where sanji and hinata become sib like beings and yeah. if that happens is it a kiba/hina thing or naru/hina thing? i vote naru/hina! please continue soon! |
| NewSon chapter 10 . 9/13/2006 Love it so far, I like your choice of Kiba. By the way, who's going to be with Sanji? I hope Lee. Later Days NewSon. P.S. Can't wait for the NaruHina to start |
| dark672 chapter 10 . 9/13/2006 it's good |
| angelofdeath291 chapter 10 . 9/13/2006 another great update i cant wait for the next chpater |
| Ultimate Shinobi 1 chapter 10 . 9/13/2006 awesome but o don have to have all the details and if each normal crew member has a friend from naruto wouldnt the ship be crowded how about not giving chopper and sanji naruto underlings and i was wondering if you are really going to write up to the current manga arc. Also could you give naruto a special ability like control fire or something that he doesnt have to transform to use other than shadow clones of course. |
| LordofVermillion chapter 10 . 9/13/2006 UPDAATES! UPDAATES! LOTS AND LOTS OF UPDATES! |
| Rivkah Ohros chapter 10 . 9/13/2006 cool |
| Swifty Heart chapter 10 . 9/13/2006 Yay it Kiba and Akumaru! |
| Ultimate Shinobi 1 chapter 9 . 9/13/2006 nice one but could you get the bounties on luffy and naruto earlier than the arlong ark or get naruto to meet some clone master? |
| Swifty Heart chapter 9 . 9/12/2006 Kakashi is going to apper isn't he... |
| chm01 chapter 9 . 9/12/2006 atill doing great i can't wait to see who's partnered with usopp if i had to take a guess tenten am i rigth or not? |
| LordofVermillion chapter 9 . 9/12/2006 nice. very. love the luffy-opens-his-big-mouth part |
| dark672 chapter 9 . 9/12/2006 it's good |
| Rivkah Ohros chapter 9 . 9/12/2006 good job |