Reviews for The Biju Biju Fruit |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter. just a few questions. Is Ace going to be luffys and narutos older brother in this, and what the hell does dobe mean? I was told by two different friends two different things like one was loser and the other was idiot. So which is it. seeya |
![]() ![]() ![]() god job and keep it up Emma. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh this should be intresting for Zolo and Sasuke I mean SOON |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol poor pluto. "sobs sobs" so is sasuke going to betray everyone cause that would make a good plot twist instead of following the opne peice cannon. seeya |
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![]() ![]() it's good |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like what you did with this story because for some reason it actually works |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like how you put the naruto characters in One Piece this a very intresting SOON |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love it love it love it love it love it i would fave but... you already on my fave's list we *is hyper off of suger* naruto: gimmie back my kunai! ur gonna hurt yourself! me: *runs with kunai in mouth* *slighly muffled* ima ninja! ima ninja! naruto: luffy stop her! luffy: *scratched head* what am i sapposed to do? me: ima ninja ima nin- *swallows kunai* O.o naruto:O.o luffy: o.O me:*chokes and faints* luffy: O.O naruto: O.O zolo (whose name is really zoro): *yawns* id better go get chopper... *stays in spot* me: X.x |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pretty good. Though I was hoping for them to become seperate and then they meet up together later in the whole story thing. |
![]() ![]() it's good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't wait for more. Also, is Hinata going to be in the story? If so, I vote NaruHina! Sry, habit. But I love that paring so much. |
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