Reviews for The Biju Biju Fruit |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ya know. With his love for food and all I thought for sure Choji would have been the choice instead of Ino. Ino really shocked and dumbfounded me here when it comes to food. I wonder what plan you have for Choji Shikamaru and Shino now. Also happy to hear Hinata is going to join and be with Naruto as well at some point at least. Now I can really enjoy this story more. Would of said something sooner but waited till I had a reason to review lol. Really shocked that it’s Ino for this chapter though. sigh. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just started reading this chapter out of Curiositybit I just have to know this. Does Naruto and Hinata end up together in this story? It’s really the only way I’ll be able to read it with her in it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Спасибо за главу. Надеюсь на продолжение. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can only wonder how the marines will react when they learn who Naruto's dad is, and I wouldn't be surprised if Akainu will try and kill Naruto, not caring if his father was a great marine (maybe he'll even say that Naruto was corrupted in one way or another, and that Minato would be disappointed or disgusted at the life Naruto chose to live) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Спасибо за новую главу. Надеюсь на продолжение. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Funny chapter continue please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() EPIC AND HILARIOUS XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's been a while since we've gotten update. What caught my attention the most was the world view of Naruto's and Ace's fathers. Roger is remember As a notorious villain, while Minato is remembered as a hero. Anyway, I'll be patiently waiting for the Next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome work please continue I'm enjoying the story |
![]() ![]() I know this is beyond late to be asking questions but I just found this thing and I feel the need to ask... Wouldn't have made more sense for Jiraiya or maybe just all the Sannin to have been in Roger's crew and are now roaming around the Grand line? Doing... whatever they do. Drinking, sleeping around, writing books, evil experiments, gambling... Etc. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Пожалуйста продолжай историю |
![]() ![]() Awesome fic hope you update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok so i love the concept and im following you and the story and wow 300 plus chapters now as some one who spends most days reading(just love to read but i dont think i can write) you have some MAJOR grammar errors thats typical when starting off and if english isnt your language and it may be better if your still writing but i really suggest getting a editor to go over chaptersi wouldnt mind haha) the bad grammer was fixed in my head as i read since i knew what you were saying it may be a pain to go back and fix em but it would help hopefully the later chapter are good |
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