I loved the story! Especially the part where they kissed. I think this is how the movie should have ended.

*From the girl you met at Alicia's party*

Just don't kill Sarah or Jareth, and I'm good! If you do, you'll have hell to pay, and not just from me...gr...Anyway, very good one-shot! I loved it

Very cute! I read that you were sixteen and I must say, you're a great writer, especially for your age. Your grasp of grammar is so much better than some of the other writers on The only thing I disliked about this fic was how quickly you got to happily ever after. Still, it was interesting and I think you should keep writing fanfic.

Hey PJW,

This is your friend from down south! I'd like to say that I really like this little story. I'm glad you wrote it. It's really good. Toby lived out his life and that was that he'd have died eventually, so your not a charater murderer. I won't be reading the other story because as you know I haven't watched the movie. We'll have to fix that. Later.

your friend

ohiowriter

this makes sense.

She was Underground long enough that she would have been affected by something.

At least she gets to stay with Jareth now.

If I were her, I don't think I'd revert back to my 15/16 year old self. That's a bit too young. Not that it matters since she's already 107, it would just seem odd to me to look -that- young forever.

good.

Great job. I have never thought of something like that. I really liked it.