Reviews for TT: The Son of Evil, Part 3: Crane's Betrayal
Guest chapter 1 . 9/4/2014
Please update please I just wanted to say

1. I think you got rid of jinx blackfire and terra kinda quick and meaninglessly
2. I would like more of crane love life
3. I wish when you brokeup jinx and Crane you should have done a part with cyborg saying "things like no hard feelings"
And jinx saying things like "we can still be friends"

Not trying to be man once again PLEASE UPDATE
mjt014 chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
This story is awesome please keep writing.
jp3711nc chapter 1 . 9/24/2006
keep writing please
Rabukurafuto chapter 1 . 8/28/2006
Reading this story imediately after your last two Teen Titan stories is very interesting, illustrating how much you've changed as a writer. This is a much more polished affair in terms of writing ability. Practice really does make perfect!

There was a little mistake I found amusing though. You wrote Más and Menos' names as Más and Manos. That's funny to me since Manos is also a Spanish word, meaning "hands". It also brings to mind a horrificly terrible movie by the name of Manos the Hands of Fate.

Good work! Please update soon!
TheOneAndOnlyEnigma chapter 1 . 8/26/2006
I know this story is going to be the greatest ever.

Keep up the good work Rahkshi500

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