Reviews for Primal Instincts
Shewhodanceswithdragons chapter 3 . 9/24/2006
Will her emotions be in wolf form too?
innocentwriter345 chapter 3 . 9/15/2006
of course i liked it! oh! and maybe you could do an operation to make raven walk on 2 legs!but ne ways...WRITE NEW STORIEZ!PLZ!
Metal Overlord 2.0 chapter 3 . 9/10/2006
Aww, that was a very cute chapter, I liked how Raven had to lap up her tea from a bowl. It was a tad short in my opinion but it was still a great chapter nonetheless. You did a great job describing Raven in her new wolf form you have a real nack for details ya kno :) I'm looking forward to your next chapter here's hoping I won't have to wait too long, later pal!
Beast of Brisingr chapter 3 . 9/9/2006
Sweet! this is so cool. Nice job on describing the wolf and how it looks. It would be so cool dude if i was a wolf. Alas, i am not. Anyway update when you can and have a blast with your Primal Instincts.
XX.xXx.AchillezWiplash.xXx.XX chapter 3 . 9/9/2006
oo! This is good! Please update soon! )
goldilocks-13fold chapter 3 . 9/9/2006
wow! a wolf huh? well thats a big twist, never would'va suspected THAT! keep updating, ya hear?
Silverchild of the winds chapter 3 . 9/9/2006
looks lile she got the instincts as well as the body
beautifulpurpleflame chapter 3 . 9/9/2006
Very good! Keep it up!

beautifulpurpleflame chapter 2 . 9/4/2006
Ooh, and the plot thickens. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Silverchild of the winds chapter 2 . 9/2/2006
THis story is going to get wierder as it goes along. Rigth?
Silverchild of the winds chapter 1 . 9/2/2006
I could see the warmup happening on the show. The stry and details are good but seem a bit rushed. It calls for shorter paragraphs.
Metal Overlord 2.0 chapter 2 . 9/2/2006
Aww poor Raven, well at least now she can get a little shut eye, judging by their bizarre situation things are sure to get only wierder. That was a great chapter short, sweet and to the point. I can't wait to see what The Hunter is up to after only one chapter I'm already really fond of the dastardly evildoer we cooked up :) Hopefuly we won't have to wait too long for another lengthy encounter with the maniacal hybrid and maybe even get a peek at his grander schemes. One can only hope, later pal!
PimpedOutGreenEars chapter 1 . 8/30/2006
I like it.I hope you continue.I'd say more but where I live it's 1:30am and my brains not working well, and I'd say somthing stupid.
beautifulpurpleflame chapter 1 . 8/26/2006
Oh, I can't wait to see what happens next! Please update soon or whenever you feel like it.

Metal Overlord 2.0 chapter 1 . 8/26/2006
Oh wow, I think I just found myself a new favorite story to add to my list LOL Seriously that was AWESOME you managed to make Hunter even better than what I had suggested, he's got the whole 'back to basics; thing going which I think is very cool, and his pets are badass even if they aren't cyborgs :) I can't wait to see what happens next so please update soon okay? I really appreciate the special thanks that was very sweet of you, later pal!
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