Reviews for Candlelight
JustAnotherHuman chapter 1 . 4/4
Plus 1 Review.
Axel0913 chapter 1 . 3/2
Aww this was awesome!
Wolf99887 chapter 1 . 1/8
Wow. This was amazingly written. It wasn't childish or didn't have a ridiculous narrative. No this was rather ingenious; something worth reading. It seems to have been written with expert ideas and vocabulary. I'm so happy that I found a story of this caliber.
Bladre MKT chapter 1 . 11/30/2016
This is the most amazing thing... He planned a bi-country wide peace for the simple sake of marrying her?! AMAZING!
toukarinluv4ever chapter 1 . 8/28/2016
awww such a sweet story
Kris Senju chapter 1 . 8/24/2016
lol I'm so happy shikamaru had plan always s plan. I feel bar for gaara I'm glad temari saw that side of him.
Granaroma chapter 1 . 6/20/2016
one of the best ShikaTema I've ever read. ,& Gaara was adorable
fanfictioner22 chapter 1 . 5/22/2016
Shikamaru and Temari's characterisation are perfect. Even though there is a gap between two ninja villages their relationship grows from lust to love.
And Gaara's insecurity and dorkiness was a nice touch.
Well done
Guest chapter 1 . 2/14/2016
Gaara in this was adorable
temari4689 chapter 1 . 11/10/2015
This fic wrecked me... The amount of time spent in the 'negative' relationship time (e.g. fights, misunderstanding, lack of communicaton, limbo, uncertainty, jealousy, fear) was really a lot.. Made the ending even more incredible. Was slightly offput when Shikamaru grabbed her and told her essentially she was being unreasonable but the rest of the fic is artful.

the narration style really dragged me in, i def felt a lot of temari's anxiety about their relationship. 11/10

(I e-mailed you drerr_redclaw yahoo)
Hina-chan chapter 1 . 11/4/2015
Good story! I love ShikaTema and you did them justice. There is a very big barrier between the two because of their loyalties to their countries, and I like the way you handled it and the ever evolving nature of their relationship. As is logical for two people who kill for a living, their beginning isn't completely sane and saint, but their affections are real and unquestionable. The two of them are really well written, and so is Gaara! I loved the scene with him, even if he is not the main character here, I think I just have to mention what a good job you did with him, regarding both his relationship with Temari and his feelings for the new baby. As I said, good story, thank you for writing this incredible fic!
inkbender chapter 1 . 3/15/2015
The little moment with Gaara is what touched me the most. Love overcomes all.
Hektols chapter 1 . 3/12/2015
Very interesting, I specially liked the insight of the characters.

The part with Gaara talking with Temari was very touching specially his joy at the news that he was going to be an uncle.
Seabit chapter 1 . 12/13/2014
Gaara's reaction is so incredibly touching, and so *him*. I'm so in love with this story!
EverlastingRyo chapter 1 . 11/20/2014
This is amazing. A puzzle that was waiting to be complete.

But would it be weird for me to say that Gaara's scene here outweighed Temari and Shikamaru. Because you perfectly captured a missing part of him.

Good job!
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