|Reviews for An End|
| noname chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
luv it.“The wedding will be as soon as school’s done.”
Pete took out his money and said, “A baby nine months later.”
Sirius grabbed his muggle wallet out of his pocket. “I’ll be best man and godfather.”
i guess they got their money huh? i wonder if they have any seer blood... nah james is just too predictable!
| Lirazel chapter 1 . 3/26/2007
This was great. I like its shortness and the ending. I'd never considered it quite this way before, but it's very realistic. And I guess that's one of the strengths of fanfiction-making us look at something in a way we never would have.
| rose.tinted.lies chapter 1 . 2/14/2007
"I’ll be best man and godfather."
ha! That was just so Sirius-like!
This was great! - I liked Remus' views on it all.
:) You're a very good writer!
| scowlingpixie chapter 1 . 1/5/2007
Wow adorable little ficlet. Your writing's short, but it's absolutely gorgeous and even bittersweet. Loved the ending sentence and no, it wasn't too abrupt. Shall definitely be reading your other stories (and reviewing them if you're lucky [that is, of course, if I don't get another fanfiction notice: You need to wait at least 30 seconds before submitting another review]) Loved it!
| LiesRungTrue chapter 1 . 8/28/2006
Very bittersweet drabble. Also, nice Remus characterisation. Quite realistic I felt. And kudos for not making Peter an evil SOB at that age and for even putting him in.
| Sarah Supernova chapter 1 . 8/27/2006
That was really cute.. :) Made me get the warm fuzzies.