I think the reason why this entire thing has been low key skeeving me out is because Hermione is just a sex doll in this. There's no agency on her part - her choices are no choices at all?

The author could have mentioned that this is a ron bashing story and Hermione and Harry are not really good people in this.. people saying, the characters have depth and have layers just think that being a terrible person gives you more depth as a character.

It's amazing but it made me miserable! I see that Ron easily forgot all about Harry and Hermione... Harry and Hermione have no regrets to what they have done... Hermione must be feeling cheated because it's unfair to love someone for so long and just suddenly fall for the other one(she should have been suspicious about the whole thing and should have done her research) before jumping in and shagging... What is wrong with Harry? Seriously I thought he was more sensible compared to Ron(I love Ron)... I must say I love JKR for not make a love triangle. I see how amazing this turned out... Thank you for writing it:)

I can't help but feel everyone is shitting on Ron. And he's the main character!

Don't think I'll be finishing this story. Especially since the characters aren't likely to improve.

This story was awesome! I liked all the news ideas and the final battle and everything you made by your own. Moody and Ron were the best. Disliked Hermione and Harry in the beginning. Hermione's constant mentioning of Harry and Victor kept killing the whole idea of 'True love' of the story. I kept thinking till the last chapter that Tonks was alive and would be back lol. Thanks and keep writing.

WOW! Is pretty much all I can say to this story. So much imagination! I'm sure even JKR would be impressed. You captured the characters very well. And it seems as if you have no problem whatsoever of changing between a love scene to a war/fight scene! I had so many things to do this past week, but they all got delayed as I was too enraptured in your story. So even if this story was posted 6-7 years ago, I thought a review is called for. Thank you!

Simply Brilliant ! Excellent !

Are you a harmony shipper or a romione shipper? Make up your mind. Your characters are so out of sync, don't read this story if you're a romione shipper.

This was the most complex, multi-layered fan fiction I've ever read. Kudos for the creative leaps. Brilliantly written. I daresay I enjoyed it as much, if not more than JKR's DH. This is a story that will stay with me for a while. Thank you for sharing.

I hope that they don't have a threesome or something.

Thanks for making Ron such a fucking pussy. Thank God you don't write him anymore...the best thing about this story is that there isn't another chapter.

This story pulls off an amazing feat: it is a Ron-bashing story where Ron is the protagonist. I've never seen that before, but it must have been fun for a Ron-hating author to get to write so many chapters where Ron gets the shit bashed out of him.

Every character in this story fucks him over-some quite literally-yet no one displays one ounce of guilt; most of the time, the others seem to revel in their behavior. These characters are unrecognizeable shells of themsleves; they are demented caricatures, and it makes me really hope that the author hated the HP characters...because if these characters were written in high esteem, the author has brain damage.

And while the main plot idea was initially intriguing, the way it was executed was a complete abortion. Cause and effect does not exist in this story-things just happen. The only reason anything happens is to cut Ron so that he bleeds a little more. It reads like a rip-off of Slughterhouse Five, where Billy Pilgrim becomes unstuck in time but manages to endure pain wherever he goes.

The biggest tragedy for Ron in this "romance" is that he has to end up with the author's Hermione, a self-centered bitch. I guess I should admire the depths that the Ron-hatred stretches...it's nothing if not consistently principled. The author managed to have Ron get raped by fate, and he gets raped for the rest of his life be being shackled to someone who only loves herself and will spread her legs for whichever man comes closest to her (or in her). Three cheers for sloppy seconds!

Good job!

Just read this fanfic in a day! It's really very very very good. Can't say much more, but I loved it!

*sigh*. This was such a fantastic story! I'm glad I kept reading after the first few chapters. Thanks so much for sharing it with us!