Reviews for Temporary untitled or A sister's grudge
fictionlover94 chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
I like your story. Cree is a good character to mess with isn't she?
ActionGal07aol.com chapter 1 . 8/27/2006
Interesting. I've always wondered if Hoagie was the cheating type. Even if he did end up with Abby, would he cheat on her with prettier girls like Cree or even Numbuh 10? I am a proud 2/5 fan, but I often find those possible love interests a threat. Though I don't know if your going to go anywhere with this story, but it was sure nice reacing.
No name chapter 1 . 8/27/2006
Hoagie traded his love of airplanes and 2x4 technology for the drama club, and hanging out with the football team? Hoagie would never do that!

Anyhow, other than that, it's pretty good. Update.
greensapphire chapter 1 . 8/27/2006
Hey this is good, I don't think I read a story like this, so I'm looking forward to it so update pretty pleasee :)

P.S I like a "Sister's Grudge" asa a title it fits to the story