Reviews for Meltdown
Anne chapter 6 . 1/3/2010
This is really intriguing story, an unique take on what happened after the fire in Kyoto. It is well written and has drawn me in. I am anxious to see how the memories of the lab and Touda's fire effect Hisoka and Tsuzuki. Even though it has been over a year since the last update, please, please, finish this story!
chibi heishi chapter 6 . 5/27/2008
Ouch. Poor guys. Tsuzuki doesn't know how to fix himself, much less anyone else, and Hisoka just doesn't seem to care anymore. Not a good combination (for them). This is a good story.
tammy-love chapter 6 . 3/6/2008
Wow!

Going though Hisoka's past with him,

Must break Tsuzuki's heart.

I mean too see what Hisoka went threw...

is also bring bad memory's of how lonely Tsuzuki was when he was being chased by kids his age, and beaten up for being diffrent not normal as well as rocks throned at him because of his eyes.

"This memory was in his mind as he told Hisoka he wanted to

protect the girl in the high school from Muraki by taking her too the Judgment Bureau."

But before he does... he asked Hisoka A question...

"Hisoka? Am... am I human?" "I...am human right?"

Please up date this story!

Will Hisoka's past bring him back to Tsuzuki?

Or will it push more pain into Tsuzuki heart, seeing him return to blackness in his mind of death?
catgrl106 chapter 5 . 2/5/2008
Are you still planning on continuing this fic? I have already read the sixth chappie as well, but apparently I already reviewed it. I really hope you do continue this story, it's a really awesome story...
SKIN READY chapter 6 . 10/31/2007
Wow... That's...

Wow...

I really, really like this story!

It grabbed me and wouldn't let go!

I can't wait for the next chapter, so I can find out if Hisoka gets better.

Keep up the good work!
colleen chapter 6 . 7/30/2007
hey, do u think u will finish this story? i quite like it.
TerraAftershock chapter 1 . 7/7/2007
Ooh... I like this!
Fen-crya chapter 6 . 6/17/2007
I don't know if I have reviewed this before...but even if I did, I think I will leave another.

I completely fell in love with this story. The way you wrote it, all the personality characteristics...and even the settings all amazed me. But it was familiar to me...

In fact, I think I read it a few...months back? But I didn't have time to even jot down the aurthor's name. And tonight (Oh joyous night) I stumbled across it on another author's 'favorites' page.

I clicked on it so fast I saw stars. Then I did a 'victory' dance. XD

~hugs~

~Taka
Sailorlight22 chapter 6 . 5/8/2007
oh... i like it, please continue!
catgrl106 chapter 6 . 5/2/2007
Wow... that was awesome. Even if it is sad. This is really well written! Please post more.
MeghanthePagan chapter 6 . 4/18/2007
How breathtakingly beautiful. just awe inspiring.
socioNycto chapter 6 . 4/17/2007
I consider it bad taste to read something here and not leave some sort of comment, so whether I can think of anything or not, you're getting one.

Usually, reading something uninterrupted for a prolonged amount of time (an hour or so, in this case) makes my brain stem ache with over-thought, but your writing is so silky smooth that I found myself almost drifting through the words. There was a bit of a dull pain later when everything started to sink in, though. I'll have to work on that.

Aside from a few problems with tense or verb confusion, your grammar is pretty much impeccable, as well.

I'm always so happy to read a story that's this well-written!
AkaiButterfly chapter 6 . 3/30/2007
Ahh amazing! Just finished the whole thing. _ Keep up the excellent plot, I'm dying to know what happens next!
nlblake chapter 5 . 3/6/2007
You absolutely have to update, I'm begging you.
nlblake chapter 4 . 3/6/2007
It's a shame that I can't praise your work as it deserves, since English is not my mother language. I know it sounds repetitive, but your characters are wonderfully like themselves, your description of scenery beautiful and flowing and your style of writing is still breathtaking.
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