Reviews for The first time
y chapter 3 . 7/10/2014
What the hell at least finish up a story
Maria S chapter 3 . 11/8/2009
OMG you'r still alive! THANK GOODNESS! And Look forward of all your great stories being broght back to health.
laceypinkdream chapter 2 . 7/24/2007
it needs to be longer it ok though lol i love rape
Mikochan00 chapter 2 . 12/23/2006
not bad at all

keep it up dude
Salted Cantaloupe chapter 2 . 11/10/2006
I really like thefic so far, it'd be cool if you could update it soon, I like the plot like and how Sasuke's all geleos and stuff about Naruto liking Sakura and all. Great work so far _
MilitantAngel23 chapter 1 . 10/5/2006
Heehee,cute story so far!Some spelling errors,but nothing that can't be fixed _
lazeee an demented chapter 2 . 10/4/2006
yay i love the idea, and whats up with your paragraph structure? it's cool though and the story seems great.
berta-chan chapter 2 . 10/1/2006
i'm liking it so far! update soon!-
Neeako chapter 2 . 9/2/2006
OO wow...very interesting! ; as interesting as your pen name. XD which is true! SasuNaru IS better then cake. X3 much more yummy. XD

Je ne!
haunting hanyou chapter 2 . 9/1/2006
hloy crap man sasuke is haywire nice
haunting hanyou chapter 1 . 8/28/2006
I dont think its bad better than mine so keep up the good work
DeadRatSam chapter 1 . 8/27/2006
I'm not deliberately trying to hurt your feelings. I'm really curious... I want to know what grade you are in. It's a decent story, it's just that I notice small spelling errors and to me they really stand out. Also maybe it's just laziness but you have left out the letter "e" in a bunch of verbs and substituted the letter "a" for "e" in a bunch of other words.