|Reviews for Conspiracies and Deception|
| Jonathan T chapter 42 . 6/3
You and Leaf Ranger make some of the best Naruto fanfic and just some of the best fanfic I have ever seen. Apart from that, you both are probably the most dedicated fanfic writers alive, which I guess you would have to be to make such long fanfics without losing quality or making it seem rushed... So, all in all, I love you both. (Also this may be weird because it's such a long time ago and you might not do fanfic anymore, but still same thing)
| brutusjr chapter 9 . 5/25
Your writing seems kind of childish. Maybe you are really young and if so I apologize. This story is kind of hard to read. It appears to be forced or something.
Sorry I couldn't be clearer with my explanation.
Thanks for sharing...
| LordHatredX chapter 42 . 1/30
good story tho at times in story seem little rushed and way to many women lol but good story
| ivanganev1992 chapter 37 . 1/15
Ch 37 . That is too much with beyond reasonable enemy equal or Minor of the Elder or Older or Primal Gods .
I shudder to think that have the Sharingan eyes . Beside the Sage Dilution of d the Eyes .
| ivanganev1992 chapter 36 . 1/15
Ch 36 Who is worst ?Juubi or Trigon . That is insane !
| ivanganev1992 chapter 31 . 1/15
If that Horor of Seal of poison is like the normal sentences with pool for power and how to release it and sword automatically doing that poison or similar seal will be serious sure death weapon .
And Razenshuriken is it better than Dragon of shadow fire . Instead that Twin shadow flame dragon razengan.
Will it be harmless . Or Chackra beam is equally devastating. And trying shadow Dragon aditionall energy. Or experiencing with the dosage the power for various effects?
| ivanganev1992 chapter 17 . 1/13
Ch 17 Well Before knowing from the revaluation I thought Cinderblock ,Terra , Or Goo .
| ivanganev1992 chapter 11 . 1/13
Ch 11 Naruto if he use Headband with seal to use the Jagan without removing it is the best way . Or Genjutsu on it or other illusion in it .
| ivanganev1992 chapter 5 . 1/13
Teen Titans Slade . Kagan from Dragon Ball . Dark flame like Amateratsu the eternal flame? Plus Telepathy, Telekinesis, Mind Resistense ,Over seeing ,Mind Control, Might Senses , Master Control and Energy Understanding . Wow .
| ivanganev1992 chapter 2 . 1/12
Ch 2 On I remember Slade but if the World Eater ,Fallen Dark Mage ,Shao Kahn , The Joker , Fallen Powerful Dark Mage ,Alex Mercer , The Prethetour,The Alien ,The Sith , The Hollow King , The Arcanars felt Pity soon or later So Why not Slade . I remember now.
| Zekedavis chapter 1 . 9/29/2016
Slade is more a chaotic neutral than evil. Because he is a mercenary a hitman for hire originally before he became a villain. Also the how Slade is the Kyuubi is because the demon father of raven from TT used him to help bring about the end of the world but Slade rebelled near the end and fought against Trigon so he kept the demonic power he was given.
| Guest chapter 20 . 9/28/2016
'Too lazy to right anything here' more like too lazy to use correct grammar
| grimmich chapter 23 . 8/1/2016
...you just made naruto break his word. He gave his word that he would take out nejis eyes and even got haishis blessing not to mension that would have been unique as i have never seen that done. Then you go and ruin it by letting hinata talk him out of it making him a damn liar! What the hell!
| grimmich chapter 19 . 7/30/2016
What would have been funny is if you pitted naruto against sasuke and sasuke got disqualified from the thrid round mwhahaha but i have yet to see that anywhere so you probably wont either :(
| guilhermejoww chapter 26 . 4/19/2016
Really liking the story so far, some spelling errors but I worked around it, nothing too bad. You made up a nice Naruto, I've never saw a single episode of Teen Titans but it hasn't compromised the story since you took time to integrate them. Definetely recommended for people like me who likes a Naruto that isn't an ignorant clueless kid. Much love friend.